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Published: 2012-04-27 19:49:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 176; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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She kissed my cheeksAnd said my scent was of the beach,
Holding me as I cried,
While the sea's salty water
Leaked from my eyes
And she held out her hand,
Catching them, so they didn't land
And tarnish the pale beauty
Of shells laying in the sand,
Breathing in the ocean of our souls.
Comments: 2
Anti-nutella [2012-07-12 21:20:29 +0000 UTC]
I agree. It's not bad but not the best. There is potential though, so don't give up
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marsorbust87 [2012-04-28 00:28:16 +0000 UTC]
i say it is on the better side of mediocre. Not bad, but not amazing.
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