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pearwood β€” muscle -- on a photo by Lydia by-nc-nd
Published: 2009-11-04 12:25:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 392; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description For Lydia.Β Β Thoughts on a self-portrait.

The sun ripples her back as the water ripples the sand.

Muscle, she says, and that is true.
And how the muscles play
with arch and shadow and glistening skin.

Bold she is, and strong, a statue in golden light.
Bold she is, and unafraid, standing tall to take the world.
Bold she is, and cautious, too, with cloth discretely held.

Light and dark, strong and frail; bold, doubting.
A fortress in sand. From dust we come; to dust we go.

Skin so fair, so soft, beguiling.
Skin so fair, so warm, inviting.
Skin so fair, so strong, protecting.

Muscle, she says, and that is true.
And how the muscles hide
the wounds and hurts and soul inside.

The sun ripples her back as the water ripples the sand.
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Comments: 22

pilas14 [2009-11-09 04:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Very awesome.

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pearwood In reply to pilas14 [2009-11-09 12:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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pilas14 In reply to pearwood [2009-11-09 16:26:50 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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agenttigerfairy [2009-11-08 05:28:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you again for this! the imagery is so vividly beautiful.

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pearwood In reply to agenttigerfairy [2009-11-08 12:27:38 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome, Lydia. You bring out talents I didn't know I had.

I can't say much technical about the poem, except that it comes from one schooled in the Psalms, with the metrical, non-rhymed stanzas in a tight concentric structure.

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agenttigerfairy In reply to pearwood [2009-11-09 16:12:38 +0000 UTC]

well, then you can say more about the technical aspects of the poem than i can.

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pearwood In reply to agenttigerfairy [2009-11-09 16:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful women inspire me, feeling being first and all that.

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horai [2009-11-07 20:39:34 +0000 UTC]

The boy is a poet and he doesn't know it.

Sorry.

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pearwood In reply to horai [2009-11-08 00:00:57 +0000 UTC]

The heck you are.

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keight [2009-11-05 03:50:18 +0000 UTC]

I knew it! Thou art a bard, now undisguised. Well and truly done.

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pearwood In reply to keight [2009-11-05 03:56:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Kate.

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akcattykit [2009-11-05 02:25:28 +0000 UTC]

NICE! Perfect!

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pearwood In reply to akcattykit [2009-11-05 02:44:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Carole.

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akcattykit In reply to pearwood [2009-11-05 03:23:50 +0000 UTC]

Well, you deserve it!

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pearwood In reply to akcattykit [2009-11-05 03:51:03 +0000 UTC]

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bainen [2009-11-05 00:37:42 +0000 UTC]

lovely

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pearwood In reply to bainen [2009-11-05 02:44:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Bainen.

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LoveIsJustADialogue [2009-11-04 18:24:58 +0000 UTC]

This is such a magnificent poem. <3

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pearwood In reply to LoveIsJustADialogue [2009-11-04 18:29:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank, Michele. I'll have to try some for you and Jilie.

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LoveIsJustADialogue In reply to pearwood [2009-11-04 18:39:21 +0000 UTC]

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Ohno-moment [2009-11-04 14:28:54 +0000 UTC]

nice job
a knave poet

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pearwood In reply to Ohno-moment [2009-11-04 14:49:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, m'dear. It's a poem that took four years and one half hour to write.

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