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peppermintwind — Break Him Open For All To See
Published: 2005-10-09 03:58:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 4325; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 213
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"I didn't sign up for this," Rodimus pointed out.Scourge grinned wolfishly, traced a claw down the captive's throat. "Should've read the fine print."
Rodimus supressed a gasp and held as still as he could. "Lesson learned," he managed in a whisper.
Cyclonus rumbled deep in his chest and spoke for the first time. "Not yet, Autobot. Not yet."
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Self-critique: You can tell I'm still learning markers and how to shade.
It's impossible to make metal look like metal with these things. I wasn't expecting Roddy's abject terror to show so much on his face, but when the muse leads, ya follow... 
I also like how Galvatron's shadow stretches forward to merge with the others'.
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*Powa the hedgehog appears and decapitates galvatron*
Powa: i thought u were made of strnr stuff galva fgt.
Rodimus
Powa: GIVE ME YOUR PENIS!
*Powa cuts Cyclonus's Penis off*
Rodimus: WHAT IS HAPPENING!
*Powa molests Scourge to death*
Rodimus: WHAT THE FUCK!
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Cool! Galvy looks pretty mad there. Like the drawing.
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That is super sexy! I want to read the fic that goes with this. Do some more, please?
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*Drools* I LIKE it! ^_^ Are you gonna finish that fic and is that Hot Rod or Rodimus Prime? I can't tell the two apart.
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thought of a story based on this picture. It could be a good story.
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*Gets whacked backside her head for thinking about slash* Ow.
*Grumbles and gets whacked again*
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Neat! I love the shading and Galvy's eyes...*Faves*
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^_^ oh my! Roddy sure is in over his head on this one 
Love the story discription and now I want to read more! Is there more?? and where can i find it?
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Hee, glad you liked. *bows*
That's all there is at the moment, but it seems as though a lot of people want me to expand on the ficbit, so I may do that at a later date.
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Wow, this is awesome! Not much to critique- Roddy's arm looks a bit too short, and his torso is a bit too blocky. Otherwise this is gorgeous! Cyc looks like he's in some kind of horny rage. XD And poor Roddy looks so scared and vulnerable and *squeeeeee*!
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Ohhh, coloured Roddy-torture!
Given that you're "only just learning markers", it looks good.
Roddy's facial expression is great. Cyclonus, OTOH, looks almost compassionate, which I'm sure was not your intention.
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Compassionate? Cyc? I was going for stern-but-not-especially-malicious... n.n;;; Enh, well, if he looks compassionate that just makes this more slashy, so I'll go with that. *bows* Glad you liked.
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