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You may have wondered how people come up with Original Characters with a functioning personality in the past. You may have also left your mouth agape when you saw someone have their Original Character react negatively to a spider at one moment, then hug their spider anthro friend in the next. Well, it's really a simple process that requires one thing so rarely used these days; thought. I'm expecting you have a general idea of your character at this point and are seeking to deepen or improve their personality now. If so, you can skip a few steps.Step one: Build a base for your character.
All things are built on a strong foundation.
Find the center of your character's mind, their motivation in life, and their drive to keep breathing (if that is indeed what they do; not all characters are human).
Something simple like "Survival," will more than suffice, as an existence like this will lead to self-conflict of yearning for a higher existence, and thus, to a deepened personality!
A few other things you can use, albeit generic, are; Revenge, Fear, Adventure, Pleasure, Greed, Envy, God, Servitude, and the like.
Also, imagine how your character's race will affect the potency of this drive. Humans are dependent upon a drive for purpose and a desire to live, an alien race may not be like this.
•Another important factor to consider is events and people which might have a heavy influence upon your character's self-decided purpose after it is set in stone. You may want to consider slowly but surely changing your character's drive as your story continues, should you so choose. This will surely lead to a more interesting read. (Added by DragonofAether)
Step two: Build upon your base.
Set up their life.
Decide what family they had, if any. The sizes of family can vary from limitless energy beings, to entire colonies, or a simple American family of four.
Give them a place to live, or a lack thereof, and make them a living thing. Your choices are truly beyond your comprehension. Take the size of the universe, of all existence, and multiply that by all the time that has come, is, and will be. That is less than the amount of choices you have!
Step three: Add some furnishings.
What can truly change your character is the little things.
What's their gender?
Their race? (<-- Note this will apply to humans and possibly to alien races. Humans divide themselves into races like Asian and English, this is the context I am using. I am not saying Human or Qiqirn)
Their appearance? (<-- may be affected by step four, events, in ways such as physical scars)
What do they like? (<-- will most certainly be affected by drive and step four)
Who do they care about, or do they even have the capability? Who is their hero, do they even have one?
This can be a challenging step however and is VERY easy to screw up! You're limited here by your prior two choices.
If they're driven by God, will they truly care about their appearance? No, they won't!
If they were born in space and went through a traumatizing experience with the waste ejection system, will they love grass and the planet? No! They'll prefer to keep clean in a metal ship!
Consider all prior choices here, Victorian furniture in a modern home is ick, and vice versa. If you get what I'm saying.
PLEASE NOTE: STEP THREE AND FOUR ARE DEPENDENT UPON EACH OTHER
Step four: Weather your structure.
Everything experiences all forms of emotions. Even simple-minded animals gain a memory of what their masters did to them, and act accordingly.
Don't just put one important event like "and then the evil Dr. Malu impaled Drake's father before his eyes!" While that is a viable choice, you have many more to take advantage of to make you character a living mind!
Give them an innocent childhood, or take it away.
Decide when they mature, at what rate, what they become, and what causes all of it.
If they have special powers, consider when and how they get them, and how it will affect them as a mind.
Put events in their life that will change the course of their life, or simply disturb them in a half-suppressed way until they're six feet under.
Some tips for you, weary traveler.
•"You gave me some good examples, but how do I figure out a drive of my own that's original?" Psychology my good man! Examine yourself, or others around you, and look deeply into your subject personality. What is the cause behind a habit of theirs? What makes them hate one person in particular? Why do they have their phobias? Extract it from that personality, and use it as your base for a new person!
•"I'm having trouble imagining how an event would affect my character. What should I do?" There's yet another simple process for this as well.
a) Imagine the phobias or likings it may develop. Being bitten or stung by a bee at a young age multiple times may lead to insectophobia, just as well as playing with friendlier bumblebees may lead to a liking for insects. Think of it the way a child would, because childhood is when the basis of a human mind can be seen. During adolescence, people become too embarrassed to show who they are inside.
b) Imagine what subconscious effects it may have on your character. These can be as simple as becoming an angrier person from childhood abuse.
c) Compare all of this to WHEN it happens in your character's life. You may have noticed all of my examples are during childhood. That is because events during childhood are much more likely to deeply effect a person. Note this applies to HUMANS ONLY. If your character is apart of your own original race, you will have to build their base psychology, which is a real challenge to do well.
•"This is all really confusing me. Maybe I'll just make another generic 'I'm sad' emo character." GTFO! If it's confusing you, just write your ideas down or put them in a notepad on your pc or mac. It's not always easy, based on your character's complexity.
•"You seem to have left out a lot of aspects of a person. Why?" I'm expecting you're already pretty knowledgeable on on how a mind works. Chances are if you didn't think on an aspect of a person, it's not all that important, and can be left out. When you decide what a person does, it is slightly influenced by you, and thus the subconscious aspects are provided by you. This is where a part of relating to a character can come from! We're all human, and thus all original characters will be partially human too! How do you think you feel like a robot while reading a first person perspective book about robots?
•"He's/she's only a minor character in the story, do I really have to put them through this process?"
No. The more minor characters are usually the center of attention, or just in the scene of the story, for just a short while. So the whole reason they exist is to pull an elevator lever, or to tell off your main character(s).
•"Do I have to do this to make a good story?"
Pffffffft! Of course not! You can easily make a good story without worrying about your characters so much. This is a lot like in the older days of writing when characters were named for their part in the story and obsessed with one thing. My own "Blinded by Dreams" is an example of that style of writing, whereas my fanfic "Hyuponia, Kingdom of Sorrow" involved a lot of psychological thinking. There are better examples though, none of which come to mind at the moment.
A word of warning... and of encouragement.
This is a very long and hard process, but it is well worth it. Because at the end, after all the studying, thought, and creation, you will know your character inside and out! Remember, you do not create the story, your characters create it for you! Kind of like how God made us, and now we're out of his control, huh?
I wish you the best of luck in your writing endeavors! If you think you're too slow after having worked on one character for months, you're not. You're doing a top notch, high quality job! Keep pushing forward until you're done, and your story (if given a decent plot) will be great!
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Comments: 85
LizZardLi [2018-03-13 19:16:29 +0000 UTC]
Does anyone know someone who's willing draw an OC for me? I have one in mind, but I'm really bad at drawing.
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pomhumangirl [2015-08-04 21:46:49 +0000 UTC]
That helped a lot really.My OC's A Time Lady and a Alzarian (Adric). So she was not too hard with this.
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TiffyCupcake [2015-02-12 04:20:54 +0000 UTC]
Dis is amazing.. I do not care if its old-ish XD Its amazing, my first oc (on here atleast) was a mistake but I loved her so much! seriously.. shes still relavant here BUT Still amazing guide! YOU GET A COOKIE!
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Gray-Zakuro [2014-08-09 12:23:02 +0000 UTC]
This is so helpful! Thank you for making this guide
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god510 [2014-04-27 02:38:46 +0000 UTC]
if only i could draw i have the perfect oc in my mind
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AvelynnOC [2014-01-05 11:59:06 +0000 UTC]
I made an OC and I finished her up using this Now I can make her out of polymer clay
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xVerdelet [2013-10-17 12:50:04 +0000 UTC]
Heh. Despite this being up ages ago, I'll comment anyway.
I already have multiple characters, a number of which are already developed. However, I'd still like to thank you for putting this up. It helped me to make a(nother) character when my mind felt totally blank. It also made me think of a number of things that would definitely count when it comes to using her (she's going to be placed in an rp group), which helps quite a bit.
Once again, thank you.
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mistychadwick [2013-08-10 01:09:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for this. I have always had trouble with my characters, and explaining how they feel etc...
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piyoh99 [2013-08-07 13:10:34 +0000 UTC]
I think this will help out a lot. My universe is mainly one of weirdness. But my OC Piwi, A robotic girl. became more down to earth after I read this. Here's a short draft of what I came up with...
Piwi was made in a lab by a scientist named Kimble to be the first humanoid robot with a heart. However, Since Kimble is usually working on making more things. She usually neglects Piwi, Making her more detached from her mother and didn't know much about anything, Making her usually play with her neighbors who are mostly boys. Piwi grew to adapt to their roughhousing ways and tends to think she's a boy, However one of her friends were different, A boy named Dee, He was shy and tended to stay quiet while everyone else played, Piwi was the first to notice and wanted to know why. Dee always kept silent in front of everyone and just didn't talk to her. But after getting used to Piwi after she tried so many times to make him open up to people. Dee eventually grew to be a good friend of hers and taught her how to do things for herself. A few days afterwards, A bully took Dee's hat. A hand-me-down from his father's and threw it in a lake, Piwi didn't know what to do and tried to stand up against the boy. Only to be pushed in the lake as well, Piwi couldn't swim at all and Dee was completely scared of seeing Piwi drown and called for help. But he had to do it himself and went in the lake to save her. Piwi was OK since she was built to last long underwater. But she developed a fear of water. After being rescued. Piwi wanted to get revenge and decided to fight the bully again, But got beaten up by him instead, Dee realized Piwi wasn't very capable of defending herself in battle and wanted to train her how to fend for herself... However there's still ways to go before she can be truly strong.
This is a little draft of the idea of her backstory. It's not entirely complete yet...
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Renigaed [2013-07-22 03:43:05 +0000 UTC]
This has helped me so much; I can now think how my OC will think. I really like this tutorial that you made, it's a great resource!
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PercipientFish In reply to Renigaed [2013-07-24 04:46:04 +0000 UTC]
I appreciate the feedback, thank you!
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PercipientFish In reply to ospaiz [2013-02-25 08:26:47 +0000 UTC]
Let'em grow, and try to grow with'em.
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Siestalan [2013-02-22 20:55:51 +0000 UTC]
Yup, I'll definitely make use of this. I already have a base idea of my first OC, but I didn't really know where and how to start working on the details. Now this helped me a lot to determine certain aspects of my little project, so thank you very much
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Kyubbigirl [2012-10-06 10:01:53 +0000 UTC]
I love makking OCs. You try making them go one way, and they say "HA! Fuck you i ain't doing that!" And make the story better...
Right after they give you major writters block -_-"
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The-Elven-Princess [2012-09-07 13:55:14 +0000 UTC]
This is really helpful. I think this will help fix one or two of my writing blocks. :3
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RainbowZebra99 [2012-03-03 00:38:40 +0000 UTC]
Is it a good idea to create an "I'm sad"-type character if they have a reason for being this way? For example, my OC that I'm developing has Selective Mutism, and Depression (because of the Selective Mutism :<)
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PercipientFish In reply to RainbowZebra99 [2012-03-03 01:11:03 +0000 UTC]
Well of course that's fine. You've just got to make sure he has something more to him than being sad, even if it is all the time. I can imagine it'd be pretty funny for him to completely ignore someone madly in love with him (is that what selective mutism is?) all the time, then just sigh and be all melodramatic. XD
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PercipientFish In reply to AstridStormLight [2012-01-27 03:12:12 +0000 UTC]
Hm? Oh dear I haven't looked at this thing in ages. xD
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skyscraper99 [2011-10-23 02:47:01 +0000 UTC]
You're very good at writing. Now, I'm remaking a character that I had. I'm only using a few things about them in the new design.. Any ideas or thoughts?
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PercipientFish In reply to skyscraper99 [2011-10-23 09:02:03 +0000 UTC]
Well, I don't know anything about your character, so I can't say I have any ideas at all. lol
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Utoi [2011-10-04 18:54:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for putting this up, I'm trying to pick up writing again and character development has always been a weak point of mine, but this has really helped out
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PercipientFish In reply to Utoi [2011-10-05 01:52:44 +0000 UTC]
Best of luck to you buddy. :3 I probably could've done better on this, but there's plenty of these kinds of tuts on DA, luckily. xD Make sure to read the rest of them, they're all really helpful!
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DragonLord-Rhea [2011-05-18 21:59:07 +0000 UTC]
hey! your tutorial is permanently featued in this-> [link]
just thought you'd want to know
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PercipientFish In reply to DragonLord-Rhea [2011-05-19 03:18:31 +0000 UTC]
o..o Thank you. I'm very flattered that you'd include me in your guide. x3
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DragonLord-Rhea In reply to PercipientFish [2011-05-19 14:24:23 +0000 UTC]
no problem! thank you for creating it!
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crazeyfwend8 [2011-05-03 08:56:41 +0000 UTC]
I shall put this in mind. I've been itching to make a story for ages, I just don't know how to start. Now this gives me some inspiration to make a character that'll help in making the plot and I also wanted to make an OC... So think I'll start now
thanks for this! It's very helpful
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PercipientFish In reply to crazeyfwend8 [2011-05-03 18:56:30 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you found it helpful. Best of luck to you!
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petpet21-7 [2011-03-31 00:26:45 +0000 UTC]
Got a character!
Motivation: To open a gate to the underworld and let loose an army of the undead.
Feeds on corrupted spirits, exact opposite of Anoxin.
Nox and Si meet in the woods, and go together, Nox for the company, Si is planning to suck out his soul and entrap it in one of her undead army.
Wants revenge on Neopia for wronging her in her childhood.
BACKGROUND: Small family of thieves, two parents, no siblings. Parents are caught, and executed. Si runs away, vowing that she will get revenge on Neopia for killing her parents.
Gender: Female
Race: Neopian
Appearance: Coming Soon
Likes: Her parents, thieving, Anoxin eventually, magic
Dislikes: Execution, King Skarl (she is from meridel) Happiness, Rich people
Cares about: Nox eventually, her parents and the other thieves in their area.
Grew up quickly, becomes a creature of hatred.
Inside though, a little white flower of happiness is dying until she looses her hatred.
Runs away after she hears the news that her parents are dead, rain mixing with her tears. Finds an old abandoned wizard hut, and finds the book which tells her how to unlock the gate. That sets her resolve right there, and she decides not to shed another tear and spend all her energy avenging her parents.
From my notes. x3 What do you think?
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PercipientFish In reply to petpet21-7 [2011-03-31 05:06:01 +0000 UTC]
Okay, I got two peoples opinions on this
Hannah: Thinks it's horrible, cliche, and kind of Marry-Sue'ish.
Garm: It's unique, but he hasn't got much else to say. Also, he agrees with Hannah to an extent.
Anyway. xD It's kind of bland at the moment, but there's a lot of room for character development to flesh out during your story. Which is good. Just remember that there's more to her than her hatred and love, there's a lot of gray area feelings, half-hearted stuff, and even things SHE isn't aware of but you are. Just don't forget about all the other important stuff, and she'll turn out great.
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petpet21-7 In reply to PercipientFish [2011-04-01 01:41:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for your advice! I will definitely try to improve it!
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petpet21-7 [2011-03-30 23:53:05 +0000 UTC]
Can you help me make an OC? I have racked my brain and racked my brain and racked my brain and I cannot think of one! I just can't think of a purpose for her.
Female dragon, I just need a fictional job for her to do so she will be interesting.
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love-to-draw [2010-08-06 08:46:01 +0000 UTC]
This is a great guideline when you try to make your own character..Thanks
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PercipientFish In reply to love-to-draw [2010-08-06 08:48:21 +0000 UTC]
Glad to see it was helpful to you. Thank you!
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PercipientFish In reply to D-Card [2010-07-09 05:09:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank ya very much. I've been getting a lot of favorites on this recently. o.o
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D-Card In reply to PercipientFish [2010-07-09 07:41:00 +0000 UTC]
I'm not suprised, it was very helpful.
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Yuna919 [2010-06-14 08:20:42 +0000 UTC]
This is really helpful. I've been bored lately and I really wanna make up an OC, without them being the usual crappy emo no childhood OC and stuff like that. Thank you!!
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PercipientFish In reply to Yuna919 [2010-06-14 21:28:59 +0000 UTC]
Wish you the best of luck. ;D Let me know how it goes!
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Yuna919 In reply to PercipientFish [2010-06-15 08:55:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I have a slight idea but I'm still not sure.
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