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Published: 2006-08-06 06:03:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 426; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 27
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**Insight Please**So it's still very early, I really want peoples opinions on this. Its obviously going to change the more I go along. But I love it so far. This started out as a long slender white card. Then went to a square off-white card, then went black, then added the background image. I personaly love the background image, that's what got me to send it to dA. Please I really want insight, if anyone will give their opinions on how I can make this better, I will love you for ever!
***blurred out my number, forgot to, not safe, lol***
UPDATE
--I edited the orange text to make it brighter and stand out more. I also centered the background and redid the circular deisgn so its more clean and crisp. More updates to come!
UPDATE 2
--I made the background image just the singular fluer, so it looks more finished and draws your eyes to the center and not soo reptitive. More updates to come later!
Ian
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Comments: 9
I think it's great..but I think the reflection from the email, name, number etc takes away from the reflection in the logo. Whatever you do...don't lose those rounded corners..I'm a huge fan of rounded corners
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I'll think about that. I never really thought about it taking away from the front side. Thanks for your input! I;m a fan of the rounded corners, too!
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Thanks, yeah i like it, but i'm updating the orange text to be a bit brighter!
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hello, only I would change the orange color into the stronger one ... I like the image of font and the source that you chose.
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[link] There ya go, but you'll have to see what I said, I don't think a stronger ornage fit very well.
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Let me see what i can come up with and then i'll upload it to my scraps and send you a note to the image, K? Thanks for the input hun! It really does mean a lot for an upcoming designer! I want to be the best i can be! The only way I can is through help and critiques, even if they are hurtfull(but your's wasn't).
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I will wait for the note ... of insurance it will stay very well
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So it wasn't in a note so other people could see it, lol! it's [link] there.
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