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Puotin threw his fist at sonotin's face as puotin would throw the killing blow.To sonotin's suprise a white light flashes in front of his face, angry for sr stopping the battle, he looks around eagerly to find he has been replace with a young man's body, angry, he just goes with it, knowing it will not effect his power, not only this, but he's in a garden, and is utterly confused by this event, curious, he walked around this garden to find a young woman treading on the ground as if it were hers. He walked up with as much authority as he could muster an addressed the girl. May I ask what you are doing on this garden? She responded, this is my garden to tread. Confused, he replies. What are you talking about? This is my garden. Baffled, the girl answered. I am the queen, all is mine. Getting irritated, he scoffed. Queen? There is no queen, only me. Obviously angry, she yelled this time. I am the queen and you are nothing! Being the young man he was, he responded with, no you're not. And she responded, yes I am, this went on until she readied herself for combat, so sonotin did the same. Right as they went for each other, all sonotin heard was Owen! And all he said was, what a weird name. Then he flashed back to find puotin on the ground with Chris over him. Ignoring the enemy, he approached Chris. It seems we have a girl who thinks she's my equal, he was back to his old form. False! Chris said, sonotin's face darkened. I'm afraid I cannot underestimate this opponent, I sensed something great in her. Chris smiled, if you want to take this seriously, I will to he said, then let's get on it, sonotin said
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Comments: 68
Perrydev In reply to ??? [2015-03-15 04:02:31 +0000 UTC]
My grammar is horrible lol,
but I think I'll write chapter two tomorrow
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 04:06:06 +0000 UTC]
You didn't have to get it done tonight. It can take me days to write a chapter. So take your time and have fun with it.
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 04:08:46 +0000 UTC]
As long as we are both b proud of our work.
okay, so you are perhaps one of the best friends I have ever had on the internets (intentionally misspelled)
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 04:15:50 +0000 UTC]
You're pretty much the only person I talk to on the internet, and I consider you my best friend too!
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 04:17:38 +0000 UTC]
That just made my day, it litterally did
i have the biggest smile ever right now.
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 04:22:53 +0000 UTC]
I'm always happy when I make people smile because in real life people tend to avoid me. They think I'm terrifying for some reason.
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 04:28:07 +0000 UTC]
That's called society.
sometimes it's the worst thing to some people, some times it's not.
as long as someone is there for you and stands by your side, you are invincible.
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 04:33:50 +0000 UTC]
That would be you, Celeste (my BFF IRL), and my little brother.
No, I like talking about poison a lot, and could probably get away with it. I like poison.
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 04:36:21 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad I could be here
now am I that little prick those people called me?
im sorry you dragged into that mess
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 04:41:54 +0000 UTC]
No, no. It's fine. Nobody's bothered me since. Besides nobody tries a hand at my friends and gets to keep said hand.
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 04:42:48 +0000 UTC]
Lol
proud to be a loyal friend
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 04:45:46 +0000 UTC]
I actually did bite a kids hand once. I was in the fourth grade and he called my EX-best friend a crybaby. He's lucky the teacher was there, otherwise I would have gone for the neck. (I was a very disturbed child)
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 04:47:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you were not alone
i was very creative when I was mad
lets just say this:
when they found the pictures, six months therapy
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 04:51:49 +0000 UTC]
I still haven't been caught! XD By now I know so many ways to torture and kill people. Courtesy of the internet.
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 04:57:57 +0000 UTC]
Fluttershy!!! Nuuuuuuuuuuuu
she will always be evil to me
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 05:00:13 +0000 UTC]
Mlp fan but not a brony
and I like the darker side of the show
what do you like?
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 05:03:19 +0000 UTC]
Meh, I watch mostly anime because they can touch on subject american shows can't. "The Devil is a Part Timer" is a pretty good example and "Blue Exorcist" too. They make Satan look like the good guy and make you feel a sort of empathy for him.
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 05:07:05 +0000 UTC]
I am addicted to fairy tail
best show ever
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 05:12:25 +0000 UTC]
I love Fairy Tail, but Netflix doesn't have all of it! DX
Who's your favorite character? Mine's Natsu.
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 05:13:43 +0000 UTC]
Elfman Strauss
i want my oc to fight him so bad and he hates him so much that I root for elf man to appear in every episode.
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 05:15:27 +0000 UTC]
Meh, I like Elfmen but Natsu's derpy little face gets me every time!
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 05:17:13 +0000 UTC]
I admire his recklessness
it fits perfectly into the chaos category.
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 05:20:55 +0000 UTC]
I just love how 99% of the time he has no idea what's going on so he just starts to destroy shit and hope that's what he's suppose to be doing. XD
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 05:27:00 +0000 UTC]
And most of the time it works
lol
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 05:29:40 +0000 UTC]
IKR?
Watch this video. I can't stop laughing! XD www.youtube.com/watch?v=NM-rx7…
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 06:26:10 +0000 UTC]
Lol, I can't get to sleep
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 16:29:23 +0000 UTC]
Lol
i just got back from church lol
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 16:42:10 +0000 UTC]
So, what variations do you want on kortana?
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 16:53:06 +0000 UTC]
Forgive me, but each character has three variations to choose from
meaning I can change the gameplay a lot
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 16:55:52 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, I still don't understand. Do you mean like her appearance? Fighting style? What?
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 17:01:12 +0000 UTC]
Fighting style
like you choose one out of three styles
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 17:07:10 +0000 UTC]
Kortona usually wields one of two weapons. For average combat she uses an iron staff with a hidden blade in it, but for more difficult opponents she uses the executioner's blade. Which looks like an Arabian saber. In hand to hand combat she uses nerve paralysis. She strikes critical points on the body and that disables her opponent. She's can use magic but tries not to.
And remember, she's half demon half angel.
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 17:26:04 +0000 UTC]
So, any ideas for next chapter?
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 17:28:26 +0000 UTC]
I've been trying to come up with an idea but I got distracted when another idea for something totally unrelated popped into my head.
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 17:37:01 +0000 UTC]
Okay, so would you like to brainstorm?
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 17:38:16 +0000 UTC]
Sure. What do you think should happen next?
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Perrydev In reply to UnknownGoddess [2015-03-15 18:04:07 +0000 UTC]
I think we should take the eyes of our people preparing for own and sonotin
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 18:05:41 +0000 UTC]
That's actually a good idea, but first I wanna try something. Do you have a gmail?
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UnknownGoddess In reply to Perrydev [2015-03-15 19:22:24 +0000 UTC]
Okay. Well there's this thing called Google Docs that allows two or more people to be writing on the same page at the same time. There's also a chat box included I think.
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