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Published: 2008-03-25 19:27:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 3019; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 0
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Platform at a train station. Nothing more to say.
Comments etc appreciated.Edit
Since this one is pretty popular, I've re-processed it. Was never particularly fond of how the processing turned out the first time, so I've spent 30 minutes retouching it. Main edits are:
- General contrast increase
- General brightness correction
- Improved detail in clouds
- Improved sky colouration
- Darkened highlights on the platform
Enjoy.
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Comments: 37
stunning. your eyes can't help following the lines of the photo as far as they'll take you. the coloring is great too.
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i think i know this train! is it in southern england by the coast?
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It does run down to the coast at Minehead but we didn't go that far.
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um.. what is the name of it?
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Not really sure, sorry.
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that's ok - thanks anyway!
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This is a great shot! I love how you captured the perspective here.
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well applied the rule of the thirds..the train comming from the side blends perfectly and gives the idea of movement...u start ur attention to it...follow it to the end..then wonder around the other very good details on the image..then go back to the train...its perfect! colours, lighting and contrast are perfect aswell.. just try adding a black border around it to see if the colours get better (95% of images get better with a border to contrast!)!
overall 19/20!
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Thanks very much. 
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This is a really great photo in so many ways!
First I really love the composition, it draws the eye in well.
I also love the way you processed it, as it really makes the colours pop.
Good work!
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Thanks very much. 
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nice perspective
this would make a really good HDR image, personally 
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Thanks.
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ahhhh
well, you can soooorta make them on photoshop by reproducing the image a few times and changing the brightness on each of them.
bit cheeky, but i did one of a portrait of my mum the other day, and i'd say it looks reeeeasonably acceptable
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Well, I reprocessed it. See the description for a list of changes. What do you think?
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ahhh yes, looks a lot better i think
i think there was just a bit too much brightness about it before, sorta lowered the professional look to it
but yeh, definitely better now its more defined
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tis alright
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I already did all I could to darken the sky down - It just wasn't to be. 
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The composition is really nice and the wet ground and bench just add to the overall effect.
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Simple but so well done...
I love trains...
Thank You for sharing it...
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Thank you.
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Its got a nice touch to it. stands out from others with the colours and lighting.
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Thank you.
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Nice shot to see. Perfect composition and balance + focus. To improveme you can clone off the electic line and add some gradient to the sky. Thats all what it needs.
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Thanks for the comment and tips - I'll probably get round to giving it an edit sometime in the near future.
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Oh, I like this. The desaturated colours lend themselves to the image excellently, and the lead-in lines work very well. The sky looks blown out in places, but other than that, it's very good.
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Thanks.
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