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Unhook the stars from the sky.Lower the curtain that you now hold.
Wipe the tear drop from your eye
As the whispering unfolds.
Sweetness of the silence
Penetrates your head.
Loving all intentions
Of what might be said.
Hating that you can't do
What it is you're wanting to.
Don't fuel the fire
With more flames.
Don't assume the most
Of what's not there.
Don't think for a minute
That all this is
Is your worst nightmare.
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Comments: 13
Unhook the stars from the sky
that line is just amazing, i love it
you find such perfect words to make your poems so meaningful
great job
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Even though you say "don't think for a moment this is your worst nightmare" THis poem makes it extremely hard to think that. LOL, but it is very nice, simple, but a little bone-chilling. That's the way I like my poetry!
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Thanks a lot! It's my outlet for many a thing.
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Yeah, I do a little poetry myself, I'm not really a drawer, but I do appreciate some good art, and when I get desperate, I post forums. I write a few poems, so if you want you can check em out.
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yeah, will do. I'm gonna add ya so I don't forget, k?
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*prob, see now I'm all dyslexic
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Nice work, It conjures up great imagery.... plus it rhymes! Sweeeeeet.
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