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ZeeZeeMonster [2007-07-06 16:10:37 +0000 UTC]

very good. I like the simple color scheme that you used, and having the letters in the background be mostly light gray gives everything a texture that doesn't detract from the main focus.

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kurostina [2007-07-02 17:57:10 +0000 UTC]

Now, I can't say I have much experience with this kind of style, but I'll do my best.

While I do see the main focus is on the 5, 4, and the question marks, I sense it's a bit busy.

One method to alleviate the business is to change the opacity of the numbers behind. For example, I see you're using about 25% gray. Perhaps changing it to 10% may suit it a bit better.

Another thing is the question marks emptying into the number 4. You can increase the separation simply by lowering the opacity of the question marks a bit.

I also see your name cleverly hidden inside the background. Nice touch.

I don't know if you did this on purpose, but is the 5 and the 4 the same type font? It seems different as one is serif and one is sans serif. It's a nice touch if people are able to pick up on it.

For me, I also tried to see if there is a pattern in the back with the colored numbers. So far, I don't see anything. If I was suppose to, then forgive me as I have no experience with critiquing typography.

Hope that helps.

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ownald [2007-07-02 06:51:12 +0000 UTC]

I've never seen something like this before, I can't say I like it, but the concept is great!

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