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pixiebutt14 — It Rained On
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Published: 2007-08-03 18:30:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 121; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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the silence is deafeningthe scream rained down
it poured over the justification
of the dreary day
the sun terrorized the sky
but the rain penetrated inside
happy lives clutter the streets
one sad life littered the alley
a gunshot rang out from the street
screams rained down
the silence was deafening
the sad life littered the alley
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Comments: 6
Wonderful!!!!!!!! ^^ 
I don't think it needs to be under mature content though... but that's your decision!
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Thank you!
My internet is currently down and for some reason it's not letting me change it to mature content at the library (silly puter) but I will change it when I get a chance to.
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Aaaaah. 
It might be deviantArt's fault.... they're silly sometimes too
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Very Nice man,
InnovationFire's right though - Out of nowhere, strong emotions will do all the writing for you
This is an excellent piece
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I agree, although at the same time I would hate to become to rely on strong motions as my muse.
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I feel it helps to write when im experiencing a strong emotion like anger, sadness and so on. So, I guess that's not really being yourself.
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