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pixiepot — Claustrophobia
Published: 2012-05-06 10:04:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 288; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 4
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Description My heart no longer holds a steady beat,
I tuck my head into my knees,
How I wish I was back on the open street.

The walls are closing in,
My chest is tightening,
The world begins to spin.
This is far too frightening.

The walls stare,
I scream,
No longer any air.

I need to act,
Too late,
I'm suffocating,
I'm trapped.
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Comments: 10

IrishBuffaloGirl [2012-05-09 15:12:42 +0000 UTC]

Well done, very well written!

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pixiepot In reply to IrishBuffaloGirl [2012-05-09 17:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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ailipalmer [2012-05-06 14:27:42 +0000 UTC]

this is very well written! you captured what it feel's like to be claustrophobic(im not, but this is how i imagine it would feel). good luck in the Face Your Fears contest!

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pixiepot In reply to ailipalmer [2012-05-06 14:32:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Thanks again.

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ailipalmer In reply to pixiepot [2012-05-06 15:13:25 +0000 UTC]

any time!

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pixiepot In reply to ailipalmer [2012-05-06 15:46:15 +0000 UTC]

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Endorell-Taelos [2012-05-06 10:11:20 +0000 UTC]

I think it's very well written. The words are pretty spot on.

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pixiepot In reply to Endorell-Taelos [2012-05-06 10:11:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I'm glad you like it.

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Endorell-Taelos In reply to pixiepot [2012-05-06 10:18:00 +0000 UTC]

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pixiepot In reply to Endorell-Taelos [2012-05-06 10:20:07 +0000 UTC]

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