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Presenting June, my new petite.Let me know what do you think about.
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Yes June, remove your panties, Clothes are forbidden here.
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Very NICE !!! Hope to see more of this character in the future.
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well m8, what to say, thanks, but the future is already past; that rendering is old, it's dated 2011.
btw you can take a look at June's gallery here:
plasticx76.deviantart.com/gallβ¦
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Very nice gallery of images !
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You see June:You are in a perfect shape. . Don't worry, be happy.
See you again!!
Frans
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I think the three renders of June are quite good, the one at the studio being the best imo. However if I were to point one thing out that makes it unnatural in this image AND the studio image is the hair. For some reason the hair in this image shape/strand wise looks good, but Material wise looks like its been spray painted opaque/matte. It doesn't look like the hair is soft is what I'm trying to say. It may be a combination of material settings and how it interacts with light.
The Studio image is absolutely superb. The success of that image is greatly in part to its amazing lighting and interesting pose/content. Its as close to perfection as it can get, the one thing that could be better in that image is is somehow getting the drooping hair to be flowing more naturally. Hopefully this didnt seem too harsh, because your stuff is incredible either way. But I feel you can push it further.
Myself
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thanks for the post and critiques that are always welcome and help me to improve myself.
Generally, the texture of hair is the worst thing that can be found in DAZ, full of fake specularity then I usually turn off that flag on those textures.
As for the softness of the hair themselves, nothing to reply to your comment, I can certainly try to improve
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Your welcome. So I guess the hair gives you trouble when its imported from Daz.. I'm not sure how hard it is exactly to make hair as I'm still at the tip of the iceberg when it comes to 3D stuff. But have you ever tried to mimic a Revlon-esque hair style? Long flowy, bouncy, somewhat high contrast (because of reflection). And I definitely think you can improve. Just keep striving to get better and don't get too comfortable in any style. I definitely think you hit a milestone with the studio series.
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thank you HeartOfDeath
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Head size: Average
Body size: Petite
Any more talk about head size and you're getting underage!
She is well balanced, and finely rendered.
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thanks Jablonsky glad you like her, actually this is something to be taken into account, thanks for reminding me about this.
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no need to thank me for that, it was obvious.
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Heh, as normal I'll poise my question... "Can I take her home with me??"
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that's sure m8, just right click on her belly
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Nope, can't find anything to say about this one... Just a great image
Andro
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I find her very cute
But are you sure that it isn't April
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lol, I think she would be April if she had her hair blacks
thanks Egoak
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You're very welcome
Strange I could have sworm that it's April.
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Ouch... What did I say wrong
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nothing friend, 
this is me ->
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Ohh! I thought that I said something wrong...
But you don't have to hurt yourself, I'm sure that I know someone who would love to do it for you
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thank you Stronghands
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she looks good, only for me, the hip is a bit to witdh....
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thanks Ela,
should we send her to do some spinning?
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Purdy.
But I personally would prefer her legs to be a bit longer
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thank you Sabhantas, but her legs can not be more longer otherwise she would not be a petite
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She looks good, but for my personal opinion, her eyes are too dark all the way around, especially mismatching the light, soft blush and lipstick. I do have to agree also with BrOkblablablah (weird name) that her head is a bit too big.
...wolfie
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thanks m8,you and BrokenDoll are right about the head, i've checked the model and I've forgot to agjust the head size, so in the next come up of June, her head will have the correct size.
Her eyes contour are dark due to the smoky makeup.
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Very welcome, friend!
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It seems like the head/face is a bit large for the body.. Otherwise, great!
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thanks for post, taking note of the head size.
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I personally think the size of her head is great if you're trying to depict a smallish girl, say about 5 feet tall or less.
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I'll do a double rendering to see if she is better with big or small head
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I think if there were some object with her to show a sense of scale it would make a world of difference. If you look at pics of real people, all different sizes, you get a better sense of body proportions relative to height. 
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Right, m8, I should put some items in my scene, but i'm minimalist in the soul, it's not easy for me
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