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Published: 2010-12-09 22:09:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1052; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 19
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This was up on my old account but I decided to put it up again and delete it from the old account!It's Rena Lanford from Star Ocean 2
She is one of my favourite video game females, I just adore her!
She's waiting for Claude, can't you tell?
Rena Lanford is not mine.
Artwork is.
Please do not use in any way shape or form this image unless you asked permission, thank you!
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Hey I remember her!! She's from Star Ocean 2!! She's so cute, and you actually made her look pretty sexy here. Nice! XD
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yuppers! i love the game, i'm glad you recognized her (means i drew her right 
thank you very much! I'm much better at drawing women then men ... lol XD
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You're welcome! I don't know about being better with drawing women, but if you say so. We all have our specialties I guess. XD
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looks like one of the sailor moon characters. I like
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I know her, I know her!!! RENA!
She's sooo cute! >w< This is so cute!!! I love her pose! :]
I've always wanted to draw a pose like this but I can't seem to get it... I wonder why T.T
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eee i'm glad that you do! Star ocean 2 is still not that popular of a game, so i'm happy when people recognize her
Oh, reference! i referenced her hands especially, and did a similar pose in a mirror 
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Yeah. I found out about Star Ocean 2 from a close friend in YouTube and ever since then, I watch its AMVs. ClaudexRena CUTE! x]
Ohhh I see, I'd try that, thank you so much!
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Yay Rena!!! I absolutely LOVE So2S! Glad you decided to post this.
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I really love her anatomy but I think that this time you could have improved her expression a little more
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I can't write critiques in the critique section because I am a dirty filthy unsubscriber, and not a member of the subscriber master-race.
Overall:
Will start with the stuff i can spot; I can see feathering and smudges of colours outside your line art, also one or two instances of erasing a bit of colour inside the line. Her mouth is open, but you can barely tell as the tongue is too close to the skin colour.
2 nitpicks; 1) The textures you overlay-ed or multiplied here aren't really necessary, they look like static or jpg fuzz.
And 2) your lines. Hun your lines. They're static in width everywhere on all your pictures ;__; It would add so much to your pictures if you added line weight into your pictures, turning on the pressure sensitivity to your tablet or thickening lines with a pen in your sketchbook.
I don't know the character so I can't say anything in regards to likeness or IC or whatever, BUT The anatomy as always is great. You either have a great grasp of female form or you have a magnificent source of references.
SUMMARY: A little more time cleaning up would make this fantastic.
Phew. I hope this was helpful and not sounding like an asshole
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lol! hmm me thinks we needs to get saru some funtime subscriptions <3
i have a horrible shaky time with my hand sometimes, i gotta start going over and cleaning up outside blobbies of colour for shizzle! didn't even notice until you pointed that out!
Seee i thought that too but on my other account someone was like 'AMAZING TEXTURES' and i glared at them. no more silly filter textures, from now on just my custom ones!
i have pressure sensitivity on..do you mean adding line variations of thickness like i did on: [link] i know it's a very basic example as i think i only did two line thickness variations?
help mehh underrrstaaaaannnddd! lineart drives me nuts as i don't know how to improve it D:
i draw plenty of naked women..i think thats where i get it from 
thank you thank you thaaaank you. i likes critiques!!
pffft nonsense! it was perfect thank you!
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Little bit, kind of, Will pop into photoshop in a bit and show you what I mean.
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Really welll done. I love the pose and the texture on the clothing. Really nice shine on all the metallic bits too and the anime style looks natural to you! Great job!
Forgive my spelling errors I am on my sisters computer and she has a stiff keyboard.
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thanks sweetheart
I'm getting there, haha each step forward!
aha no worries
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thank you very much! mine as well
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