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Description Author's Note: This is my first fanfiction. This chapter is not very exciting, but the next ones will be. And I'm sorry for my bad English.

f/n = first name
l/n = last name
h/c = hair color
e/c = eye color
f/c = favourite color


I'm on my way to Samezuka Swim Academy to meet my childhood friend and former kohai at my old middle school, Nitori Ai. He's a very good friend of mine, but sometimes I think he's too kind. In middle school I had to protect him of some beaters. I know it's creepy, when the girl protects the boy, but I'm one year older and more confident than Ai.

I also thaught him to swim and how to swim fast to participate in competitions. Since middle school I won all competitions I could participate in. That's why I think I'm a very good swimmer.

Ai always cheered me up and said he wants to become a swimmer like me. I'm very proud that he's in a swim academy. I want to visit a swim academy too, but the only one for girls is on the other side of Japan and I don't want to leave this town.

Today I'm wearing a (__f/c__) top and a black skirt. My long (__h/c__) hair is falling over my back.



Nitori's POV

I'm so nervous! (__f/n__)-senpai wants to visit me today and I can't concentrate on school or swimming. She's the best swimmer I know, better than Matsuoka-senpai and coach Mikoshiba. I want to become as good as (__f/n__)-senpai, but I know that's impossible.

I hope she's proud of my swimming skills. She's such a great person. When we were younger she always told me "It's okay, I'll help you." Then she smiled and the world was great. She's my best friend and I hope that will never change.

I'm so in my thoughts that I don't hear that it's my turn to swim. Coach Mikoshiba yells at me "Nitori, what's up with you. You're spacing out way too often. Do you have some kind of a problem?"

"It's not a problem. It's just, my childhood friend comes to visit me today and I'm very nervous. She's a great swimmer and I'm affraid she's not proud of my swimming skills."

"A female swimmer. Interesting. I want to meet her too. It's always good to know other swimmer as well." Coach Mikoshiba says this with serious face, but all the oher members have a shocked expression on their faces like they don't believe I know a girl.



Your POV

I'm now at the entrace of Samezuka Swim Academy. The school looks great. I'm a little bit jealous. I go through the campus place and make my way to the swimming hall.

Ai told me he has swim club before our meeting, but I want to see him swim, that's why I skipped last class. Outside the swimming hall I can hear many male voices who say in a choir "whaaaat!?" I ignore this and go inside. I'm going through the door and the first thing I see are many eyes on me. For embarrassment I looked to the ground.

"(__f/n__)-senpai!!" I hear the familiar voice and begin to grin, but my smile disappears when I realize how he calls me. I hate it when he names me senpai, because we know each other long before school and only because I was his senpai in school he calls me like this. "Ai, I told you to not call me senpai."

I say with an angry voice. He runs to me and I hug him. He's still wearing his swimsuit, but he's already dried off. When I look over his shoulder I see shocked expressions on all faces around us. I end the hug and bow to the swimmers.

"Hello. My name is (__l/n__)(__f/n__). Nice to meet you." When I look up I see that the faces of many of them are red. I don't understand this, but I don't really care.

A tall red haired guy walks over to me and holds out his hand. "Hello. I'm Mikoshiba Seijuurou, coach of Samezuka Swim Club. Nitori told me you're a swimmer too. Maybe you want to have a practice with us some time."

His offer surprises me. I shake his hand and smile litly. "Why not. I'm looking forward to this."

Then I face Ai and say with a cheerful voice. "Ai, I skipped my last class to see you. I want to see my former swimming student in his glory." I grin widely at him.

Mikoshiba-san looks shocked. "You thaught him how to swim!?" "Yes, we know each other since birth and when I learned swimming I thaught him too. Later I showed him how to swim fast." I hear some voices from the people around us. Ai mutters something I can't understand.

Mikoshiba-san say "That's a great idea. Let's go, Nitori!" Ai is not very happy with this, but he makes his way to the pool. He positionates himself on the starting block and jumps into the water. He's faster than the last time I saw him swim. I'm very proud of him.

After a while he comes out of the pool. He looks a bit nervous, but when he looks at my grinning face, he smiles back. "Ai, that was great. You improved your skills!" Ai is relieved, because all his sorrows were meaningless.

"I'm happy your proud of me, (__f/n__)-senpai. I go change my clothes and then we can go." He makes his way into the lockerroom. I have a little conversation with Mikoshiba-san about the girls tournments. When Ai comes out of the lockerroom, I go to him and wave back at the Samezuka Swim Club. We go into our favoutite cafee and talk about the last time.



Rin's POV

She's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen. I love how her long (__h/c__) hair charms her face and how her (__e/c__) eyes are shining. And the best is she's a swimmer too and a very good one I heared. I want to see her swim and also want to swim with her. But I don't understand why Nitori had the luck to be her childhood friend and not me. I'm very jealous. She has the most beautiful smile I've ever senn. When coach asked her to practise with us I could hug him. I need to learn more about her.
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Comments: 6

Rosettaluv4 [2014-07-31 07:44:17 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely! ~

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Aliswonderland101 [2014-07-17 04:58:51 +0000 UTC]

It's good, but you should really proofread.

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The-QueenofHearts [2014-01-19 19:15:56 +0000 UTC]

Now I start with the spam xD

I really liked this chapter espacially the last part
And yes, I will use a bunch of smileys xD
Its very nice how you describe all the charakters ♥

When I read your Story I totally could fall in Love with Rin
Buuuut Haruka is best

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xTiffania [2013-09-28 10:56:58 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait for the next chapter  

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possibly-wrong In reply to xTiffania [2013-09-28 12:27:35 +0000 UTC]

thx!!


I write as fast as I can

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xTiffania In reply to possibly-wrong [2013-09-28 12:38:16 +0000 UTC]

Yay ^w^ well I wait for this

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