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Author's note: Yeah, here it is! The last chapter of my first Reader-insert. I hope you enjoyed it and read more of my stuff.f/n = first name
l/n = last name
h/c = hair color
e/c = eye color
f/c = favourite color
Your POV
After Rin said something like that my world exploded. He didn't answer my phone calls and when I visited Samezuka he didn't want to see me. All that makes me to an emotional frack. I don't speak so much any more. My phone is turned off.
Also my swimming skills seems to drop. Coach isn't angry at me when she vissited my training. No, she's worried. I'm too.
I didn't tell anybody what happened. Not Haru, Kuro-kun nor my best friend. My life is lonely now and everybody knows that. Rin was my first big love and it hurts. It hurts so much I can't bear it.
Today are the Regionals and when it goes on like this I don't have a damn chance to win.
At the moment I'm packing my back for the Regionals. It's routine, but I almost forgott my goggles. I go to the bus station and go by bus to the Regionals.
There I go straight to the locker room and change into my (_f/c_) sports bikini. My (_h/c_) hair is tied up to a pony tail when I wait for my turn to swim.
Haruka's POV
A few minutes ago I had an interesting talk with one of (_f/n_)'s friends who I met in the town. Rin must have told her something which mage her mad. I haven't seen (_f/n_) for a while. What happened this day? I shouldn't left them alone.
Now I'm in Samezuka High school to talk to Rin. I meet his coach Mikoshiba. "I'm Nanase Haruka. I want to see Rin."
"Ah, it's you. Matsuoka doesn't want to see anybody since a few days. Sorry." He looks a bit irritated.
But then I see Rin. He walks there so peacefully. I run to him, push him to the wall and grab his collar. "What did you you say to (_f/n_)?!" I've never felt so much anger before.
He looks at me with the same expression as mine. "What I told her!? That she can be happy with you, jerk. She can stop playing with me!"
That's the problem. Is he an idiot!? "(_f/n_) and I aren't going out. You damn idiot, she wanted to tell you that she loves you!"
Rin feezes.
He looks at me with wide eyes. "She loves me...?!"
I let go of him and he slids to the ground. "I'm such a jerk!"
"Yes, you are, but now's not the time for this. (_f/n_) soon begins to swim in the Regionals and she's really depressed because of you. You need to apologice to her or she won't win. Go!" I pull at his arm and push him to go. Rin runs a bit before he turns back to me. "Thanks, Haru." I hope he'll make it.
Your POV
Only a few minutes before it's my turn. I'm so not in the mood to swim. Rin is always on my mind.
Suddenly the door burstd open and my angry coach comes inside. "(_f/n_), didn't you hear it? It's your turn, now. come on!"
I walk to the large pool area and seemany people sitting there to watch the competion. On the left I see the Seirin fan block with many plakats. Kuro-kun, my best friend, all the other from my school and the Iwatobi Swim Club is there too.
My eyes wander to the ground. I know I won't make it today and that is mor depressing than everything else.
I posionate myself on the starting block and take on my googles. Only one minute.
"(_f/n_)!!" I hear my name and turn around. First I thought it is a haluzination, but there he is. The person I only could think of the last weeks.
Rin.
Sweat drips from is face. It seems like he runned here. "(_f/n_),I'M SO SORRY!!" He shouts and everyone turns to him. My heart stops.
"I'M A BIG JERK AND I HURTED YOU SO MUCH. BUT I WANT TO TELL YOU SOMETHING: I LOVE YOU! (_f/n_), I LOVE YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART!"
He loves me, too?! A big smile appears on my face and tears stream down. This whole time he loved me. It's a bit silly, this misunderstanding, but I'm glad now.
"I love you, too, Rin." I whisper before I turn around and wait for the signal to start.
It soon comes and I dive into the water. I've never felt this good. And in the end I won the Regionals.
I come out of the water and a strong arm pulls me into a hug. Rin's clothes get soaked from the water, but that doesn't matter now.
Then I grab his collar, pull him down to my high and kiss him. I kiss him with all the passion I have. We pull and grin at another.
Behind us the people start to claps and all my friends come to congratulate me. The day started so bad and ended like a dream.
The rest of the day i celebrate with everybody, but Rin had a hard time with my best friend and Kuro-kun, who ask him out the whole night.
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Comments: 10
PokeGirl4everMe [2014-07-15 12:34:59 +0000 UTC]
So kawaii~ My shark prince ^^
But its done, thats kinda sad, but now there is bonus story
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The-QueenofHearts [2014-01-20 14:01:05 +0000 UTC]
Ohhhhhhhh
So romantic *o*
And...and really it was perfect
The timing was great D
And Haru is just
Cant describe my feelings
Love this so much ♥
Well, it was an really great, dramatic and totally romantic story with an absolutely great ending
Im Looking forward to your next storys, especially the one with Haruka
This comment got really long xD
But I needed to describe my feelings when I read this in the evening in my bed. Just died.
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Animelover2296 [2013-12-30 11:56:06 +0000 UTC]
loooove it! the feels! oh the feels! Rin! Thanks so much writer-sama i really enjoyed this
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possibly-wrong In reply to Animelover2296 [2013-12-30 14:58:05 +0000 UTC]
No thanks to you that you love it so much <3
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SkeletonDolly [2013-12-26 19:49:56 +0000 UTC]
Yeah ! Reader-chan won the Regionals ! And Rin-chan show his feelings for her *-* happy ending ! ♡
I really really like it this ♡ this was very awesome ! ♥
Congrats Writer-san ! This story was perfect !
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possibly-wrong In reply to SkeletonDolly [2013-12-26 20:44:17 +0000 UTC]
Hope you like the bonus stories too
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xTiffania [2013-12-26 16:01:05 +0000 UTC]
Great! So intensive *O* ! So much feels I love you Writer-sama two bonus story? I can;t wait ^O^
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possibly-wrong In reply to xTiffania [2013-12-26 17:34:53 +0000 UTC]
I'll write them as fast as I can so you can read it soon
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