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Author's note: Finally my new chapter is here. I'm so sorry that it took so long but school was really stressful, but now I'm in holidays so I ahve more time to writef/n = first name
l/n = last name
h/c = hair color
e/c = eye color
f/c = favourite color
Rin's POV
I'm such an idiot. I was so rude to her, although she just asked me the way. I'm so used to be rude to everyone, that it's hard to not be. I think she hates me now, but that was not what I wanted.
She's such a beauty in her (_f/c_) bikini. All the idiot's faces are red. Of course mine was too, but I'm mature enough to control myself.
And coach is an idiot as well. He doesn't hide that he likes her. It pisses me off. Then he says. "Okay, (_f/n_). I think you can swim first. All of us want to see your swimming skills. Which style do you swim?"
"Freestyle."
She swims freestyle too. She gets more and more interesting and likeable.
She nods to coach, takes on her googles and places herself on he starting block. It seems like she's in her element. Her warm smile shows that this is the most wonderful thing for her.
Then she jumps into the water. Her form is perfect. She dives a while and when her face comes out of the water, she makes a perfect stroke. At the end of the lane she turns around with a stronge stroke. She is ingredible fast. I've nerver seen someone so fast. That's unbelievable.
When I look around I see that everyone thinks the same, because all their mouthes are open. After a too short time, she comes out of the water, takes of her goggles and swings her her beautiful (_h/c_) hair.
Her checks turn red when she sees the speechless faces around her. Then she looks at me and gives me a triumphantly grin. Ah, I forgot I named her a silly girl and she wants me to know better.
Coach goes to her. "Wow, I don't know why you want to train. You're ingredible. You're... I don't know what to say." Coach is such an idiot, but she seems to like nice guys, because her chekchs turn even redder.
"Mikoshiba-san, now I want to see your swimming skills. They surely are very good. And the others too. Can I see?"
Coach grins to himself. "Okay, let's show (_f/n_) what we can."
And the rest of the day we swam. All together with (_f/n_). Of course I swam too, in her near, so that she can see and I think she watched me but that's probably only wish thinking. It was really funny, but I didn't show them, that I enjoyed it. I'm too used to act like a mean guy, that I can't stop with that. I really want to be nice to (_f/n_), but my ego is in the way.
Your POV
After swim practise with the Samezuka Swim Club, I change back into my school uniform. I dry my hair and go back to the swim club members. I say goodby and go to the front gate of Samezuka with Mikoshiba-san and Ai.
"Thank you very much, that I could practise with you guys." I bow and smile at the two guys.
"No problem, (_f/n_). You can come everytime again." Mikoshiba-sans smile is so bright and honest. I've never seen something like that.
I look back at the school building. I'm still jeaulous that I can't go to a swim school, but that's okay. But... Do I see right? In one of the windows I see a mahagoni haired guy standing. It's this jerk from earlier. What's up with him?
"(_f/n_)-senpai, it was great to swim with again. At the Regionals I go to cheer you up." Ai is the nicest person I know. I hug hime gratefully. "Thanks, Ai."
"Of course, I come, too." Mikoshiba-san wants to come too? I'm happy, but I think it would be really embrassing. He's the kind of person who don't hide his emotions. Not a little bit. I think have to life with that... "Thanks, Mikoshiba-san."
Suddenly I hear a bell ringing. I turn around to see my good friend Kuro-kun driving at his bike. He stops next to me . "Hey, (_f/n_). Hope you didn't wait long."
"No, I was just comming out. Ah, Mikoshiba-san, Ai, that's a good friend of mine, Kuro-kun. He was so nive to drive me." Kuro-kun waves at them lightly.
"Goodby, (_f/n_)-senpai. See you." I wave at the two guys and place myself at Kuro-kuns luggage rack. He begins to drive and soon Mikishiba-san and Ai are out of sight. It's not far to my house.
When we arrive I jump of the bike. "Thanks, Kuro-kun."
"No problem, (_f/n_). Did you have fun?" Fun? Yes, when I ignore the embrassing cheering from Mikoshiba-san. "Yes, a lot of fun. But..."
I remember my meeting with thie jerk. I don't even know his name.
"But?"
"There was a guy. He was not very kind to me, but it's no big deal."
"When you say he was not very kind means this he was a jerk, wasn't he. When he was unfriendly to you, I go and tell him my opinion." When Kuro-kun says something like that it means he wants to punch him. Two month ago I was walking in the city and a group of guys comed to me and wanted me to go with them. Kuro-kun saws that and two of the the five guys are still in hospital. He easily looses his temper, but he's a very ggo freind.
"No, it's oay, Kuro-kun. Thanks for today. See you tomorrow in school." I smile at him and go inside my house.
I know in his head he considers if he drives home and let it be or drives to Samezuka and search for the jerk (I call him like that, because I din't know his real name). I hope he drives hime.
I go to my room to change into some comfortable clothes and make me something to eat. I sit in the kitchen with some selfmade rice chopper still thinking about the jerk. Why is he still inside my head?
Suddenly the door bell rings. I wonder who Β wants to see me at this hour. Maybe Kuro-kun forgot something to tell me.
I make my way to the front door and see... a tall dark blue haired guy standing there. It's Haruka from Iwatobi Swim Club. What does he want?
"Hey"
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Comments: 11
Rosettaluv4 [2014-07-31 08:28:45 +0000 UTC]
OMIGOD! I loved that chapter as well. We'll done, Possibly~
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The-QueenofHearts [2014-01-20 13:24:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh Rin β₯ He can be really cute, I think but he is right: He was such an idiot
But... I dont know why but hes also really adorable...Your story makes me liking him more and more O_O So that shows its a very very good story ^-^ (hug)
And Haruka... You made me so lucky Β
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Jaaahrnbeeez [2014-01-17 07:41:01 +0000 UTC]
magnifique~ this is absolutely fabulous <3 now onwards, to the next chapter :3
kuro-kun? as in tetsuya kuroko? xP
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possibly-wrong In reply to Jaaahrnbeeez [2014-01-17 20:26:49 +0000 UTC]
in this fanfiction I didn't mean Kuroko but I thought of him and he's my favourite character in KnB
Thanks
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SkeletonDolly [2013-10-25 03:14:02 +0000 UTC]
R-Rin! You're so clumsy so so .... also I love you!Β
You can not deal well with someone who is better than you (?Β Β
I want a Nitori, where I can get one?Β Β
I love you fanfic β₯
I'm anxious and excited to read what follows x3
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possibly-wrong In reply to SkeletonDolly [2013-10-25 12:48:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much Β
Rin will be clumsy a little longer. It's not easy for my beloved reader <3
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xTiffania [2013-10-22 13:22:50 +0000 UTC]
Haru o.o? Wow I didn't expect it I love your fanfic < 33 I can't wait for the next chapter β₯
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possibly-wrong In reply to xTiffania [2013-10-22 19:12:55 +0000 UTC]
When I wrote this I didn't expect this either. It crossed my mind and I thought it would be nice.Β
Thank you very much for always reading my fanfic
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xTiffania In reply to possibly-wrong [2013-10-24 18:58:01 +0000 UTC]
Aww you're welcome I'm your firts and biggest fan haha
You can count on me < 33
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possibly-wrong In reply to xTiffania [2013-10-24 21:01:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very very much. You need to know I always count on you when I upload a new chapter
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