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Published: 2013-01-02 16:34:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1154; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 12
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At a café, a woman catches a glance with a handsome man wearing a black fascist looking coat.She smiles,
"I bet you think you're crazy with your
collection of Japanese horror films, and
snuff films. But what you don't know, is that
I'm crazier - with my necessary need to rip apart
every heart that falls at my feet. I don't
poison. And no, I don't moonlight
as a serial killer. I'm worse. I'm your worst
nightmare. You look at me and all you see are
black patent leather boots and a similar coat
as yours but what you don't see under these
cherry red drawn lips are teeth that
pierce and consume. Eyes that
penetrate so deeply, they're
soul stealing. Or these legs
that'll cast a
façade on hell and
call it heaven.
What you don't see,
is your end,"
she thought.
He smiled back.
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Comments: 37
wallawallaw [2013-11-18 02:06:21 +0000 UTC]
very nice work of art... i love the way you put it
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Postmorteum In reply to wallawallaw [2013-11-18 13:12:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
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wallawallaw In reply to Postmorteum [2013-11-18 17:25:24 +0000 UTC]
thank you for letting us take part in your art
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KMusicDreamer [2013-04-23 03:41:58 +0000 UTC]
Holy shit. Girl. This is sooo good. This is kind of how I feel as the female devil. That I'll just break every man's heart. But yet they all fall at my feet in worship. Well, not all since my own boyfriend doesn't seem to do so. Alas, what I meant by commenting, is that this is quite brilliantly well done. I would not change anything about this poem if my life depended on it. Just simply exquisite! Keep it up! <3
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Postmorteum In reply to KMusicDreamer [2013-04-23 03:59:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for the kind words! I greatly appreciate it.
What good is a boyfriend, if he doesn't fall at your feet in worship?
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KMusicDreamer In reply to Postmorteum [2013-04-23 04:22:47 +0000 UTC]
You are quite welcome.
Haha, right?
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Kamal-Q [2013-04-07 17:07:50 +0000 UTC]
I like the skull-text-formatting - matches the imagery in the piece well. You capture the moment well, the instance when glances are exchanged. I wonder what the man thought, as the woman thought what you wrote
Thanks also for the s
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Postmorteum In reply to Kamal-Q [2013-04-08 05:40:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you kindly! The skull took numerous trials until I was happy with it.
So that does mean a lot!
Exactly! Thank you for your thoughtful comment! It's much appreciated.
My pleasure.
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Kamal-Q In reply to Postmorteum [2013-04-08 11:01:26 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome I enjoyed it, if you write another from the man's point of view, I'd love to read it
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BluestWaves [2013-03-28 09:43:28 +0000 UTC]
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
wow
what you don't see is your end.
yes yes yes, truth.
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Kaziline [2013-03-19 02:23:28 +0000 UTC]
Yes! a powerful, twisty ending! so hard to find these days. i just love that.
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Shroomsta [2013-01-10 20:58:05 +0000 UTC]
Ooooh shivers down my spine....
..Never underestimate a woman
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Morethenselfies [2013-01-08 11:36:30 +0000 UTC]
Pardon my french here, but...
FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!
This is sooo dark, yet entertaining I almost went "haaaa! Suckkkeeeerrr!" ( good thing there is no one around. hehe )
And the way the text is shapend, it's amazing.
Somehow your poem reminds me of that female thief (omg, what legs! ) in Batman Begins.
Although there is no remorse here, like a black widow waiting to strike out of pure hunger...
Just...
...
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Postmorteum In reply to Morethenselfies [2013-01-09 20:54:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you greatly!
Thank you! I'm glad it's recognizable.
Exactly! Haha nice analogy!
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Morethenselfies In reply to Postmorteum [2013-01-10 10:44:49 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure.
:heart=
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dreamsinstatic [2013-01-05 02:49:04 +0000 UTC]
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features .
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ClaireAdele [2013-01-03 14:54:41 +0000 UTC]
Nice i love the small changes you made, its just right <3
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Trichardsen [2013-01-02 16:45:33 +0000 UTC]
Very nicely written and composed, I like the way you shaped the words and this journey through this though pattern, awesome work.
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Trichardsen In reply to Postmorteum [2013-01-02 17:05:26 +0000 UTC]
you are certainly welcome.
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