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Postmorteum — You(r)
Published: 2012-09-28 15:41:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 940; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 12
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Your voice, transcending legatos;Beautiful, calming, melodic,
Gracefully harmonic.
Your eyes, candle lights;
Bright, kind, benign,
Amicably inviting.
Your hands, tender velvet;
Soft, soothing, gentle,
Compliantly docile.
Your lips, sweet opiates;
Sedatives, addictive, divinity,
Alleviating infinity.
Your tongue, crème brûlée;
Aflame, untamed, racy,
A risqué cabaret.
Your body, chocolate mousse;
Smooth, decadent, delicious,
Impossible to resist.
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Comments: 25
A very fine piece of poetry!
Makes you fancy for more
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You could wipe someone of her or his feet with this?
Hmm, except I would change:
"Your eyes, candle lights;
Bright, kind, benign,
Amicably inviting."
into:
"Your eyes, sea of stars;
Bright, endless, twinkling,
Blessful drowning."
BUT, that's how I would say it to you for example.
This makes it your own, your thoughts and fantasies.
You wishes and no one elses.
And that's what I love about your poems and you.
You have a special style, untouchable.
Like mist floating in the morning sun.
I hope, that writing and sharing this poem has helped you to process your feelings.
Lovely!!!
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I'd hope so.
Aw what a lovely perspective you have, such that someone is lost in their eyes. I took on the inviting/safety aspect. When I meet someone who has a sweet disposition, I usually see it in their eyes and it's always so warm and inviting to me like a candle.
Ow, don't make me cry now.
"And that's what I love about your poems and you. You have a special style, untouchable. Like mist floating in the morning sun." Thank you.
Thank you for all your support.
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Thanks for your comment.
That's the beauty of it, everyone sees something different.
I'm sorry if I almost made you. I know very few people can be so sensitive... I'm terrible at being thoughtful of my emotions sometimes. :S
My pleasure!
Oh, and thanks to you, I'm working on my own poem.
Inspired by the band Hybrid...
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Aw, no thank you.
Exactly!
Oh no worries at all!
Excellent.
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Pfff, been a busy week, but hopefully I can work on my poem a bit tonight.
It's strange, when I have a wonderful idea, it often hangs, suspended between reality and thoughts/fantasy. :S
Please help me? 
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This sounds like an ode to someone, really great mindset the poem puts on the reader.
very well composed and just overall a great feel to it all. Thumbs up.
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If you want it to be it can.
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