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Published: 2011-05-02 21:59:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 223; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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I have few secrets left,I've opened my heart and
Given them all away,
Except for two.
Open heart; open mind;
Open love; open life.
Where truth rules
There are no secrets,
Only those of others
Told in confidence.
Of myself, I share all,
Even though fears engulf me.
Fear has become my friend,
My companion, though unwelcome,
And unwanted.
Sometimes, fear is all I have,
Except the loneliness that
Keeps me company
When the fear hasn't
Robbed me of my senses.
I see that I have no reason
To keep any secrets anymore.
So I give these last two away as well.
The first is forbidden love;
A love so profound and deep,
But so divided with illicit desire.
The last is the fear that I am
As undesirable as I feel I am.
So now that all secrets
Have been set free,
All that remains is my friend and companion;
Fear.
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Comments: 7
Zylund [2014-04-28 04:44:57 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that is a pretty potent piece. This is so detailed and precise. I love it.
Very descriptive and interesting ^.^
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nevergetfooledagain [2011-07-03 19:12:22 +0000 UTC]
And of course I would find this today. Tomorrow, I share one of those secrets with someone I care very much about, and I've spent the afternoon shaking at the thought - because, of course, the last thing I want is for him to think less of me. Thank you for sharing this, it makes it easier when you know that you're not the only one who's afraid...
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primowalker In reply to nevergetfooledagain [2011-07-04 00:52:19 +0000 UTC]
It is hard to get past the fear, but there is freedom once you do.
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Jada1977 [2011-05-12 02:15:45 +0000 UTC]
And don't you find it's usually the most cathartic when it controls you? I am enjoying your writing very much!!
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primowalker In reply to Jada1977 [2011-05-12 02:36:50 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I do!
I'm so glad you are enjoying it!
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