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princessezza — All Smoke and Mirrors Part 3.
Published: 2012-09-27 16:26:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1089; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 5
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Description Tayla sat outside the hall for about an hour after the show had concluded. Grace still had not returned. She was probably having a great time relaxing with Orval and his assistants backstage, and Tayla was missing out. She promptly jumped to her feet and made her way back into the hall and headed backstage. She made her way through the empty hall and up onto the stage, where one of the assistants was hastily scribbling something onto a clipboard. She stopped writing as she noticed Tayla. "I'm sorry young lady, but you're not supposed to be. Orval isn't signing any autographs tonight." "I'm not here for an autograph; I'm here to see if my friend Grace is back here..." "Oh, you must be Tayla! I'm so sorry to keep you waiting, right this way." Tayla followed as she led her behind the curtains and down a dim hallway. "I'm sorry she hasn't come out yet, she has been a little tied up chatting with Orval." Tayla chuckled. "That sounds like Grace."

They stopped at a large wooden door at the end of the hallway. "Here we are, Orval and your friend are in this room. I'll leave you to it, I'm sure you can remember the way out." Tayla smiled and nodded as she spun around to face the door. She gently pushed opened the door and peaked inside. Nothing could have prepared her for what she saw. Grace was sitting tied tightly to a wooden chair, struggling furiously. The red ball gag was still firmly in place in-between her teeth, causing drool to run down her chin and onto her dress. Her eyes grew wide as she saw Tayla. Her soft mumble turned into a loud muffled "Mmmpphhh"! Tayla stared in shock, but before she could react, she was grabbed from behind, a hand clasped over her eyes and mouth. Her arms held tightly behind her back, she tried to fight back but whoever was holding onto her was far too powerful. She was pushed forward until she reached a chair, where she was promptly forced onto it. At that point, the hand covering her eyes was removed and she could clearly see who had grabbed her. It was the two girls that opened the show! They wasted no time forcefully securing Tayla to the chair, she could barely struggle against the overpowering women. The way they worked was as if they had done this many times before. Her ankles were tightly secured to either leg of the chair and a tight rope across her stomach directly below her breasts was attached to the bonds around her arms and secured to the back of the chair. She could barely move and inch! The hand covering her mouth was finally pulled away as the girl walked towards the dressing table and slowly began searching inside one of the drawers. "Please... Please don't do this... let me go... I haven't done anything... I won't tell anyone..." Tayla muttered as she gasped for air, struggling to keep back tears. The lady scoffed. "It doesn't matter what you've done, all that matters is that your here. Now it's time for you to shut up, you're louder than the other one." Tayla's mumbles were becoming harder to understand, as the tears began to roll down her cheek.  The lady returned, holding a red ball gag similar to the one they put on Grace. "Lindsey, hold her still." The second women grasped Tayla by the top of her head as the other forced the ball into her mouth deep between her teeth, and secured it at the back. The two women stood back to admire their work. "Excellent. I think the big guy is going to be pleased."

Tayla and Grace sat helplessly for a few minutes before the two ladies returned, accompanied by none other than Orval himself. He wore a huge grin on his face, visibly proud of his captures. "Well ladies, I hope you enjoyed the show" he said cheekily. "When they told me they had picked my next target, I never imagined they would be so very beautiful. I'm sure you're going to love it here, Lindsey and Rebecca sure do. The crowds will go crazy for you two, such sexy new assistants" he said greedily. Tayla and Grace looked at each other, they finally realised what was going on. Orval was not nearly talented or successful enough for people to even consider working for him, so he took matters into his own hands. "Oh, I feel like I've rambled on. You girls probably don't want to sit here and listen to me, you want to get straight into the action don't you? Well, you will be happy to know we have a show scheduled on Friday in the next town, so you get to make your debut very soon! So we don't have much time to waist. Ladies, get their measurements and have them fitted, I want them ready for rehearsals tomorrow morning!" And with that, he arrogantly strolled out of the room. Tayla nervously watched him leave. What could he mean by fitted?

It didn't take her long to figure out. "Well, you heard the man, let's get to work" Lindsey said as she handed Rebecca a pair of yellow fabric scissors. "I'll do the short one" Rebecca eagerly replied. Tayla looked on in fear as she began cutting Grace's dress from the bottom slowly up to the top, where it quickly sprung apart, revealing her black panties and strapless black bra. Signs of fear and embarrassment began to appear on Grace's face too as the dress was immediately pulled off and thrown to the floor. She promptly wrapped a tape measure around her stomach, and around her breasts. "Looks like we got a size 5 here" she said as she tossed the scissors and tape to her partner. Tayla now faced the same fate as Grace, her eyes pleading with Lindsey as she towered over her. "I'm so sorry hun that I have to wreck that darling little outfit of yours." She bent down and unzipped Tayla's boots, pulling the both off and placing them on the floor. She grabbed the hemline of her jeans and began cutting, working her way up each leg until she reached the waist where she cut straight through. After two cuts the pants came straight off, showing her pink, black spotted underwear. The scissors made short work off her tank, revealing her matching bra. Tayla couldn't have felt more embarrassed, as Lindsey quickly sampled her stomach and breast size. "This one is a size 6" she  called out as Rebecca quickly scribbled it down onto a piece of paper. "Thanks ladies for being so co-operative, you're both going to look gorgeous in a leotard." Tayla again tried to mumble a few words, but the gag stopped her as drool began to fall onto her now exposed body. "We will go and get these ready for you to try on tomorrow. In the meantime, Orval should be in shortly to show you one more magic trick, as a special treat." The two ladies disappeared through another door, presumably the wardrobe.

The two girls sat quietly in the middle of the empty room. As they sat half-naked in the magician's dressing room, Tayla's mind was buzzing with possible escape ideas. All of those ideas faded however, as the door slowly creaked open and Orval peered inside. "Now ladies, are you ready to see my final magic trick?" The girls furiously shook their heads. "Excellent! This trick is going to make you feel a whole lot better and make you a lot eager to begin your training." The girls whimpered as he produced his wand from his pocket and began to wave it. "Say hello to the NEW Grace and Tayla..."

The End.
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Comments: 9

dungeonguy59 [2013-11-10 17:03:15 +0000 UTC]

Overall, a fun bit of reading to check out. Since most bondage themed writing seems to be done from the dominant male's perspective (guilty as charged, although I do try to limit the usuals), it's interesting to read something from a female "victim"s point of view. You get much more of an idea about what makes it fun or thrilling for her, too.
Since few of us have to do any writing of any creativity once out of a few school classes, it takes a little experience to flush out the artistic flourishes and details. But the important part is how you can visualize a scene in your mind and bring it to life for a reader.

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princessezza In reply to dungeonguy59 [2013-11-10 22:41:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I've also got a few other finished pieces but I just havnt got around to putting them up

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FruityTingle [2012-11-05 12:31:51 +0000 UTC]

Iv'e read all 3 of them now and I have to say, Fantastic Job! The description of the girls is awesome, I can tell perfectly what both Grace and Tayla look like! The bindings in this part are superb, and I love the touch of the scissors cutting through their cute little outfits and revealing some sexy matching underwear. From the ending I gather that they are being put under his spell to be performers forever? Love it!

Keep up the awesome Work, would like to see more

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Mr-Timeshadow [2012-10-01 03:01:24 +0000 UTC]

Paragraph 1, Sentence 6: "...to be here."
P 1, S 11: "Tayla followed the assistant..." since "her" would refer to Tayla herself in context.
P 2. S 2: Comma splice. "Here we are! Orval and your friend are in this room!" Ditto for S 3: "...to it. I'm sure you can..."
P 2, S 11: "how can one hand -- even the size of mine -- cover her eyes AND mouth?
P 2, S 16: comma splice. "...to the chair, and she..."
P 2, S 18: "...her stomach, directly below her breasts, ..." S 19 "...an inch!"
P 3, S 4: "targets", since he has 2 girls. The rest pf the paragraph is packed with comma splices!
P 4, S 6: "The assistant promptly", since "she" would be Grace in context.

Overall, I enjoy the story! The ending was a fun twist because, while we know he's kidnapping the girls,he's apparently a REAL magician masquerading as a hack. Why would he do that? My theory is that he deliberately drives part of the audience away so that there are fewer audience members. He can make his selection seem more inevitable, and also have fewer witnesses to question what really happened.
You describe the two girls well, from looks to lingerie, and I like their reactions! Orval is consistent in his behavior, convinced of his greatness and never doubting. The descriptions are erotic but not purple or overdone, and I always love a story with a happy ending: the damsels don't get away, or even have a hope of it! What a change from the traditional Hollywood of "hero to the rescue"! This is more realistic, and more fun for me...

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princessezza In reply to Mr-Timeshadow [2012-10-01 08:50:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot, I really appreciate it

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Mr-Timeshadow In reply to princessezza [2012-10-01 22:13:23 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! I hope you found it helpful, where Australian spellings aren't concerned...
I was thrilled to see your story in print after you put such work into it, and I've been trying to rally friends to chime in when they can. I'm eager to see what you write next!

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aidenke [2012-09-29 00:49:20 +0000 UTC]

Some very fun work here - it's a little coarse in a few places, but those are things that polish out with practice - nothing you did wrong! A very curious end, suggesting there's even more than meets the eye going on, and the bonds are a lot of fun - a curious little magic show indeed, but sounds like fun!

Keep up the good work!

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Lylani [2012-09-27 23:09:17 +0000 UTC]

Well as a (aspiring) writer myself I've read all three parts and I think it works well. There's a few gaps in the story - imo - but that's perhaps just the way I view things. Sometimes things left out can open the door to the readers imagination, other times it's nice to have things spelt out (no pun I swear ) for us.

Keep at writing, you have a gift for it.

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princessezza In reply to Lylani [2012-09-28 00:29:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your feedback This is my first major piece so its nice to know where I stand and how to improve for the future - Thanks

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