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Sin #3: I've read my fair share of human in a anthro Equestria and I've noticed that a lot of these stories seem to made to have the human character have sex or at least in a relationship with a overly sexualized anthro character. While I have no problem if it was a clop fic, there are stories where it seems to make the characters anthro just so the human character will have little issue having sex with them (or in many cases, start herds). Don't get me wrong, while it's okay to have the human character fall for an anthro one, sex shouldn't be the only (or major) reason to make them anthro (again, unless it's a clop fic). So how could you tell? just ask these three questions:
1. how early is romance implied? how sudden is the sex?
2. Is there less than 3 humans in the story?
3. If you were to replace the anthro with normal ponies, how much of the story would change?

Side note: I have no idea if Rarity would be enough to consider this "mature content", so be on the safe side I just marked yes. As for the model, I couldn't find a soria model that works for gmod, so I had to take one from a half life 2 mod to Garry's mod and make some changes to the textures, lighting, body groups and all that good stuff just so I can make this comic. Now to the question if I would make and release the rest of the mane 6, the answer is yes but if people actually want me too. anyway, agree, disagree or have a suggestion, I would love to hear it.

bonus sins:
>Cringey dialog
> the writing in here is why I won't be making fics any time soon
> part of the dialogs where borrowed and edit from other fics
> there are no word on the computer screen even though he was obviously typing
> the words he does write is illegible
> I heavily modified a hl2 skin just so I can make those two scenes
> anthro Rarity's right arm is awkwardly placed
> anthro Rarity is looking at the viewer instead of the human character
> I'm pretty sure I have a grammar error somewhere

Sin #4-5: Sin #4-5: Tragedy and average joe

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Sin #3: I've read my fair share of human in a anthro Equestria and I've noticed that a lot of these stories seem to made to have the human character have sex or at least in a relationship with a overly sexualized anthro character. While I have no problem if it was a clop fic, there are stories where it seems to make the characters anthro just so the human character will have little issue having sex with them (or in many cases, start herds). Don't get me wrong, while it's okay to have the human character fall for an anthro one, sex shouldn't be the only (or major) reason to make them anthro (again, unless it's a clop fic). So how could you tell? just ask these three questions:
1. how early is romance implied? how sudden is the sex?
2. Is there less than 3 humans in the story?
3. If you were to replace the anthro with normal ponies, how much of the story would change?

Side note: I have no idea if Rarity would be enough to consider this "mature content", so be on the safe side I just marked yes. As for the model, I couldn't find a soria model that works for gmod, so I had to take one from a half life 2 mod to Garry's mod and make some changes to the textures, lighting, body groups and all that good stuff just so I can make this comic. Now to the question if I would make and release the rest of the mane 6, the answer is yes but if people actually want me too. anyway, agree, disagree or have a suggestion, I would love to hear it.

bonus sins:
>Cringey dialog
> the writing in here is why I won't be making fics any time soon
> part of the dialogs where borrowed and edit from other fics
> there are no word on the computer screen even though he was obviously typing
> the words he does write is illegible
> I heavily modified a hl2 skin just so I can make those two scenes
> anthro Rarity's right arm is awkwardly placed
> anthro Rarity is looking at the viewer instead of the human character
> I'm pretty sure I have a grammar error somewhere

Sin #4-5: Sin #4-5: Tragedy and average joe