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Protothor — Salvation
Published: 2006-03-18 00:20:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description You watch in horror as the world slips away,
You see yourself, as if you are nothing more than a puppet.
Lied to all of your life, you now realize the truth,
Salvation was but a hairs breadth away.

Watching from beside yourself, you watch as the fields burn,
The forest alight in a near spectral inferno,
All that you loved, all that you ever knew gone, forever.
You see them, all of them staring at you,
Emotion and agony playing upon their face,
Watching as if you have the key to their redemption.
Looking down, you see a book at your feet,
Two words scrawled across the front, only for you to know,
Yourself once again, you reach down to pick it up,
Opening the old binding, separating the pages slowly,
You find the key to Revelation.

Once again you are beside yourself,
your body slowly fading into darkness,
you had thought you had won,
saved all of them, all of those faces, those eyes,
but you were to late, to late to discover the truth.

It is now that you have the chance,
One last chance to save them,
Now that you once again live, today,
You hold the key to their salvation.

In your hands you still hold the book,
The words now printed in gold,
Those words and all that the represent,
All of those words in that book,
you can save them, if you try.

saved all of them, all of those faces, those eyes,
but you were too late, to late to discover the truth.

It is now that you have the chance,
One last chance to save them,
Now that you once again live, today,
You hold the key to their salvation.

In your hands you still hold the book,
The words now printed in gold,
Those words and all that the represent,
All of those words in that book,
you can save them, if you try.
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Comments: 4

dv-comment-account [2006-09-17 21:18:56 +0000 UTC]

I like it a lot. Very good. Although I guess I'm not as good at critiquing as the guy before me....
It would actually make really great sound lyrics... I'll give you the names of bands and you can send them this... some actually do that, you know.

You'd be famous. !!!

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Protothor In reply to dv-comment-account [2006-09-17 21:20:32 +0000 UTC]

I would, now. Send away.

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Mishu-san [2006-04-09 02:28:30 +0000 UTC]

OMG Ian. WTF. "You can save them! No you can't! You can save then- no, no I was just kidding, you really can't- wait! Yes you CAN! save- NOOOOO No you can't save anyone! yes you can damn it!"

PICK ONE! Can you save them or can't you?

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Protothor In reply to Mishu-san [2006-04-10 02:03:35 +0000 UTC]

Yes...?

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