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Published: 2015-07-13 08:10:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 534; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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We tried to break it off,before the dust settles.
But like a nuclear explosion,
it radiates within us.
This sentient lover, my terminal predicament.
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Comments: 11
ShadowWorldRed [2015-11-06 00:45:36 +0000 UTC]
An air burst catches one by surprise,
When expecting a more predictable
Ground detonation.
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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to ShadowWorldRed [2015-12-15 11:15:41 +0000 UTC]
As ashen sheet covers all,
unbreakable silence endorsed.
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Chezzy-Am [2015-08-02 18:22:59 +0000 UTC]
I think you were referring to fallbacks of a nuclear explosion in this poem, right? From what I gather, its straightforward, and it definitely is something which makes you consider how one would react when shit hits the fan - there's nothing you can do, because the deed is done, and it is going to bring about destruction.
All in all, a good poem
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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to Chezzy-Am [2015-08-11 17:16:37 +0000 UTC]
It's a love poem in nuclear metaphors.
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Chezzy-Am In reply to PuzzledHeartBox [2015-08-12 05:37:24 +0000 UTC]
I see.
Quite a megadeath isn't it.
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