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PuzzledHeartBox — Toxic
#breakup #dust #love #nuclear #pain #sentient #terminal #toxic
Published: 2015-07-13 08:10:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 534; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description We tried to break it off,
before the dust settles.
But like a nuclear explosion,
it radiates within us.

This sentient lover, my terminal predicament.
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Comments: 11

ShadowWorldRed [2015-11-06 00:45:36 +0000 UTC]

An air burst catches one by surprise,
When expecting a more predictable
Ground detonation.

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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to ShadowWorldRed [2015-12-15 11:15:41 +0000 UTC]

As ashen sheet covers all,
unbreakable silence endorsed.

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Yagamiseven [2015-09-02 04:33:16 +0000 UTC]

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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to Yagamiseven [2015-09-02 06:06:04 +0000 UTC]

Much appreciated.

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pulbern [2015-08-05 14:35:32 +0000 UTC]

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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to pulbern [2015-08-11 17:15:59 +0000 UTC]

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Chezzy-Am [2015-08-02 18:22:59 +0000 UTC]

I think you were referring to fallbacks of a nuclear explosion in this poem, right? From what I gather, its straightforward, and it definitely is something which makes you consider how one would react when shit hits the fan - there's nothing you can do, because the deed is done, and it is going to bring about destruction.

All in all, a good poem

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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to Chezzy-Am [2015-08-11 17:16:37 +0000 UTC]

It's a love poem in nuclear metaphors.

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Chezzy-Am In reply to PuzzledHeartBox [2015-08-12 05:37:24 +0000 UTC]

I see.

Quite a megadeath isn't it.

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hunterN05 [2015-07-14 01:49:41 +0000 UTC]

Short, but awesome!
Nicely done, nicely done.

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PuzzledHeartBox In reply to hunterN05 [2015-07-14 04:00:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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hunterN05 In reply to PuzzledHeartBox [2015-07-14 04:26:22 +0000 UTC]

No problem :3

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