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Thank you for the comments on my first submission! Here is the second version of it. I lightened the opacity on the hand and played around with it a bit. I also made some other minor changes. I think it looks much more balanced.
For those of you who didn't see the first version, This is an image that tells the story of a person who is offering a garden of memories to the person they were made for and with, so as to never be forgotten. Every piece of this image adds to that summarized story.
Please leave some more suggestions on ways to improve this image. I'm new at this! Thank you

Description
Thank you for the comments on my first submission! Here is the second version of it. I lightened the opacity on the hand and played around with it a bit. I also made some other minor changes. I think it looks much more balanced.
For those of you who didn't see the first version, This is an image that tells the story of a person who is offering a garden of memories to the person they were made for and with, so as to never be forgotten. Every piece of this image adds to that summarized story.
Please leave some more suggestions on ways to improve this image. I'm new at this! Thank you