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My feet blistered from the walk to your understandingI spoke till I understood myself but sometimes
that isn’t enough.
Who should I be for you?
I get lost in the meaning but I feel the same about you.
If I was what you said, would I be me?
I am so thirsty, there is no quenching my thirst in your pool
you will not let me understand.
Understand, such a word...I am lost.
What does anything mean in a time like this?
I feel like I'm here....but not...gone and just arriving.
nothing but something
focused confusion
rhythmic unbalanced chaos.
sunken into quiet being
done
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Comments: 3
nemish [2004-03-19 03:57:43 +0000 UTC]
There is an emotional duality to this. Like the voice in the back of your head. I really do like this one. Its very real.
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pyriel In reply to nemish [2004-03-19 13:30:26 +0000 UTC]
it has been a long time since I have put up any poetry...thanx for the comment. Been too long since I've seen you as well.
sup bud.
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