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pyroxyz — A Beautiful Two
Published: 2016-03-14 19:31:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 207; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Such beauty in twoAs here I lay in bed with you.
This love we have, almost divine,
For I am yours, and you are mine.
Here we lay as one
Under the watchful eye of the sun:
Souls mingling,
Hearts tingling.
Yet not perfect are we,
For there are sure to be
Some bumps and turns along the road
Where we will reap what we have sowed.
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Comments: 10
There's a lot of feeling to what you write, and those feelings make the writing beautiful. It's easy with visual art to see why it's beautiful, but with writing you have to really feel. You achieve that feeling, the emotion from your work is clear.
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Thank you very much! Also, with my visual art, it's very easy to see why it's not beautiful... At least my drawings. XP But again, thank you.
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I haven't had the opportunity to look over your entire gallery yet. Beauty however is in the eye of the beholder. What one finds beautiful another may find repulsive. Or in some cases it's the hideousness that makes it beautiful.
You're quite welcome.
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Oh, you don't have to!!! Lol they're actually kinda embarrassing considering what other people do here!
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Beautiful. Very dedicated. It sounds like you really felt this.
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Indeed. I've always been one of deep feels. :3
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Great job. You express it well. ^^
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Anytime. You deserve the praise.
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