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Published: 2016-04-01 18:14:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 352; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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I enter the house in the dying light,Shadows growing,
Eating away at all that is sane and rational.
Every sound seems amplified in my fright
As I open the door for I know not why.
The gloom sucks me in
And some unseen hand pushes me onward.
What ghastly adventure lies ahead?
I can only wonder
And tremble in fear as I enter the room.
What was that?
A shadow there where none ought be
In the corner of my eye.
I turn, but it's gone as quick as it came.
A sound, creaking, slapping
Like footsteps in the floor above.
I was sure I was alone
But was that really true?
I go up the stairs to investigate,
But I feel a chill run up my back.
I quickly turn to look
To see a mist fade away.
What had been there now gone,
Frightened, I went on.
I saw footprints where I had heard them before.
Red, they went across the floor and stopped at the door.
I look up to see a face.
Ghastly, it screams
And I awake,
Glad it had been nothing but a dream.
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Comments: 14
JustifiedxSundays [2016-04-04 12:26:06 +0000 UTC]
I am really loving this poem, right here. The imaging was great, the way you spoke was fantastic. Your talent only improves! Great job, and I'm glad you took the prompt ^^ Happy thoughts!
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pyroxyz In reply to JustifiedxSundays [2016-04-04 14:20:06 +0000 UTC]
Seriously? I didn't think this one was as good as the others! Thank you!
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JustifiedxSundays In reply to pyroxyz [2016-04-04 14:58:55 +0000 UTC]
Yes, seriously! You're a natural! Β
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JustifiedxSundays In reply to pyroxyz [2016-04-04 17:07:34 +0000 UTC]
Anytime. Just bein' honest!
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ScarletDeath7 [2016-04-02 04:38:02 +0000 UTC]
Way to capture that eerie feeling. Very cool.
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Lucifer-Poison-Angel [2016-04-01 18:44:27 +0000 UTC]
Good job man. Definitely has a creepy vibe to it.
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pyroxyz In reply to Lucifer-Poison-Angel [2016-04-01 19:33:50 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you! :3 I thought it was a little clichΓ©d to be honest, but I'm glad you liked it!
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Lucifer-Poison-Angel In reply to pyroxyz [2016-04-01 22:14:41 +0000 UTC]
But it's horror, it's all a clichΓ©. The point is to unsettle, to draw up images of extreme discomfort that in turn give way to terror.
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pyroxyz In reply to Lucifer-Poison-Angel [2016-04-01 22:20:58 +0000 UTC]
Lol well then did I succeed?
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Lucifer-Poison-Angel In reply to pyroxyz [2016-04-02 02:00:28 +0000 UTC]
Indeed you did sir. There isn't a feeling of malevolence in your brief tale, but there's definitely an uneasy eerie feeling.
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pyroxyz In reply to Lucifer-Poison-Angel [2016-04-02 02:31:03 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! That's exactly what I was going for!
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Lucifer-Poison-Angel In reply to pyroxyz [2016-04-03 01:45:12 +0000 UTC]
You've done a fantastic job. You kept it simple, and focused your imagery on things that are easy for us all to picture. And I think we've all had that dream where we're walking, or running, or something of that nature, only to be confronted by something that snaps us awake.
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