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Round Four - Bloodbath
Page 48 of 48
The Prologue to Bloodbath - The Beginning of Bloodbath - Previous Page
THE END. The evil, evil, evil end. For now... (God, I can think of so much epilogue material... MUST STOP...)
If it's any comfort, I'm 90% certain Erroneous is going to lose his exoskeleton and pass out within the next ten minutes. So Teal is probably safer than he seems. (You'll notice Erro's been supporting himself against the wall this whole time... he ain't doing well, even if he is putting on a nonchalant front.)
And I'm afraid Teal will probably end up healing Erroneous after all. Kid is just too nice... (He'll have to regain his power and fix himself first, though. His powers tend to be reduced for a while after he snaps, which is why he hasn't done this yet. Plus he's all woozy from Erro-toxins.)
Poor teal. TEAL NEEDS A HUG. From someone besides Erroneous. Any volunteers?
Teal is copyright
Erroneous and all other characters copyright
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Im in line to hug Teal now! hehehe, and methinks now the line is empty See i give Teal Two hugs lol
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Teal needs all the hugs he can get! Always! 
...Glad to see people are still reading these old episodes and they're not just mouldering away...
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I always look at old stuff it gives me back story that i constantly crave. (its more entertaining than tearing through countless book series within a matter of days)
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Oh dear god. I just now returned from camp to find this.
"WHY ARE YOU NAKED?!"
"WHY AM I NAKED?!"
That was hilarious XD And I'll volunteer! *hugs Teal*
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Hee hee... glad you like it!
And Teal needs all the hugs he can get...
(Just accept the nakedness, Teal... Join the Naked Revolution!)
Teal:
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Me: I own your voice Teal. And as your voice, I command you to accept. NAO!! >D
Teal:
He really does need plenty of hugs to make up for all the abuse...XD
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ah flippin' hell.... this was hilarious XD i have to sleep/should have slept long ago...must work tomarrow with jigsaw...noooooo ;.;.//// THANKS for your KICK ASS comic^.^
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eheh... You're welcome! And thanks!
(Well... If this stuff is keeping people awake I must be doing something right, anyway.)
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Quick question--can I ask how you do your comic panels? Do you draw them by hand or do you add them in with a program like photoshop?
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All the art and the paneling is done by hand (because the panels are so much part of the design, I like to draw them in early just so I can see what I'm doing.) The panels are drawn with Micron pens; everything else is brush and ink or crowquill pen, and some Micron pens used for straight lines...
I DO clean it all up and adjust the contrast in Photoshop... but the only thing I usually add digitally is the word balloons and lettering (in Illustrator, imported into Photoshop.)
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*huggles everyone in sight*
...
*except michael jackson*
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if you do make an epilouge, Erro should tell his name to everyone.
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Now that you mention it, I think the only person he's properly introduced himself to is Javi...
And we know how well he gets along with her.
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Erroneous' (omg i think i spelled it right!) name really fits. i look up the definition on dictionary.com.
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Hugs all around! For Teal especially, I think. I'd pay for that boy's therapy if I could, but sadly I'm a starving student. And hugs for Erro too - I think he deserves it after having his skin ripped off, what, three times.
...though I'm not so sure I want to carry through on the latter. Maybe when he's gotten rid of that exoskeleton. And is safely unconscious.
And hugs for you too! This is just as awesome (if not more so) than your previous entries. I love how you did the muscles, and the use of black, red and white as your main colours. The effect was really striking in all the gory scenes. And your plot was lovely and fluid again. But I especially love the muscles. It makes my inner Biology geek gleeful.
I'm amazed that you managed to do all this with a broken leg and dialup, too - I think you may just deserve some sort of award for being badass, or something along those lines.
Oh dear. Another epic comment. XD I'll just end on a note of eeehehehehe sexy Erro EEEHEHEHE.
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Thanks!
Um, yes, unconscious Erro is the best Erro, I think... 
Glad you liked the fancy muscle/gore effects... I was totally going out on a limb with that, I wasn't sure how well it would work. Though I must say black-red-white is always one of my favorite color combos... can't go wrong with that combo, really. (I hope all the muscles were reasonably correct - I dug up bunches of muscle reference to do this, but I didn't have access to my anatomy books, so I'm not 100% sure about all of the muscle shots...)
An award for being plain-old-gosh-darned-stubborn, maybe?
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awesome! i leave for a little bit and there is a whole graphic novel done. i wish i could turn out the work like that!
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Thanks!
It certainly felt like doing a whole graphic novel... Erg, come to think of it, there's probably enough pages for a whole graphic novel.
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Wow. What can I say? I love Teal - I'm even writing a fanfic of the l'il guy right now, and not only did you do a decent job of capturing his character, but you made a decidedly entertaining and awesome comic in the process. I've heard that your published and now I can see why: that was much much better than most comics I've seen in stores and the art matched professionals. But of course you know that. Fantastic stuff, overall. Loved every moment of it ^_^
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Thanks! Glad this has met the approval of a Teal fan! I've become a Teal fan while working on it, I'm sure...
I haven't had any actual comics published, as yet, not printed comics anyway... But I've done a fair bit of animation and character design stuff, which is not unrelated I guess... (Still, my dream job would be to make a living off original comics. Someday, I hope.)
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Yay! Another freakin' long entry crawling with plot and funny stuff and the gender-bender naked menace!
Seriously, I'm impressed about the work you can put out even with that broken leg and a slow internet connection.
And now I have a new favorite pairing, too!
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...and there may yet be an epilogue, depending on subsequent events.
Glad you like it!
Go, go, TealxErro! 
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._. I. Love. You. But I've said that already, so it's pointless. Putting that aside... Anyway, I'm in line to hug Teal! (And it looks like a long line. Wow.) DON'T FALL ASLEEP, TEAL! ... At least he's semi-safe, right? ^ ^;
Well, from now on I'm stalking your page. I was afraid to before because of the inbox filling but no question, you deserve to be watched more than most of the people I'm currently watching!
Would it be too much to ask to keep in touch? That'd be really cool. ^ ^
Ah! And... Epilouge. I agree. Why resist? *wiggles eyebrows* I'm kidding. I know how insanely busy you are, and with that epic tale it's far too selfish to ask for anything more. That was amazing. I'm going back to read it all over again!
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For sanity's sake let's assume he'll be safe...
Of course we can keep in touch! I have to say I read and thoroughly enjoyed all your IF entries, too, despite the fact that they take forever to view on this stupid connection, and I think I've become a Teal fan now... 
Actually, if the rumor is true about this being the end of IF, there may BE an epilogue. I've had a sort of epilogue planned for whenever I lose/make it to the end (whichever happens), so if it's all over I'll probably do that now. Only now of course it'll feature Teal.
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I never entered TC, sadly enough.
I'm an Erro fan too! (As much as a nudeophobic can be.) He's just so... evil! XD
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Whoops, there's me thinking everyone entered TC except me...
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XD Good luck! It was my first OCT so comics are kinda... iffy. And it's a good thing you missed it. It was a trainwreck. >_<
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"you deserve to be watched more than most of the people I'm currently watching!"
As true as that may be, thanks ><
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I don't care about blood! I'm in line for a Teal-hug <3
And I like the splashes of blood in this episode.. that is definitely what I try but never manage to achieve. Jealous here.
Good grief that kid's cute.
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Heh, thanks, the red was totally experimental... Guess it turned out pretty well, though.
And yes, Teal's cuteness will melt your brain...
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This was worth the wait! You never fail to entertain.
I'd gladly hug little Teal, he looks like he needs it. And maybe some chocolate. And some therapy.
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Thanks!
He needs a large chocolate cake. And several years of intensive therapy.
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Exoskeleton-Erro is the manifest of pure wicked smexyness. 
From this point on, I shall officially be you fan. (Or rather, I've been for a while. Does it make me seem like a total idiot, if I said that I listed you one of my favourite artists on my university application interview paper thingie...? And did that sentence even make any sense, I wonder?)
ANYWAYS, awesome job, as always!
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Oh my... thanks!
(Well, I don't think it makes you sound like an idiot, but then again I'm biased...
Exoskeleton-Erro... not a bad look, now that you mention it. He'll have to do that more often...
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It's a good thing that Erro's having that exoskeleton now. That way, he wouldn't be in a state to properly *COUGHtakeadvantage*COUGH* of dear Teal when he's passed out.
Goodness gracious, 70 freaking pages in total... Though I can see why the whole thing had to land up to that amount. All that gangster chaos was a setting to make poor Teal snap and turn him into a mindless skin-ripping kid. And that was a clever way of defeating Teal too.
THE END. The evil, evil, evil end. For now... (God, I can think of so much epilogue material... MUST STOP...)
Why resist the temptation~?
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(Trying reeeeal hard not to think of the technical details, here...) >.<
Yes indeed, the plot kind of took off and I couldn't stop it... Plus there were all those loose ends from previous episodes, and having to free everyone from the gangsters and get them to the final arena... It all adds up. And of course way too many ideas for more horrifying things to do with Teal and Erro...
There may yet be an epilogue, actually. Rumor has it that the tourney may be canceled after this round, which would be sad, but... it would free me up to do an epilogue. I had one planned for the finish anyway, which I would have done as soon as I lost/made it to the end... So if it's all over, I'll do it now, just to tidy everything up.
We shall see what we shall see...
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Oh goodness me! (You probably know this by now, but...) I just saw this journal: [link] .
I'm sorry that the tourney had to end at this round. Still, great work so far! Your Round 1 to Round 4 entries had been quite enjoyable to follow!
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I can always enlist him in EA:LEC, you know! (And contaminate the whole league... Oh dear...)
(EA:LOEC? Er, whatever the acronym is...)
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Oh, true enough! The EA-LEC could always use a little erroneous!
(Yup, it's EA:LEC 
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I still don't quite understand how Erroneous recovered so quickly from his own poison... Or has a lot of time passed?
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Um, time has gone by. Somewhere in that black page. Do I need to stick a "later" somewhere? I couldn't think of anywhere to put it where it wouldn't interfere with the flow...
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Poor, poor, poor, poor, poor, poor Teal... There, there... 
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Aw, thanks!
Teal needs all the hugs he can get. And cookies. 
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OH GOD. I CAN DIE HAPPY. Ahahhahaahha~
|D I'm not ashamed to tell you that I was clawing at my DEVwatch inbox for the next page. I am also not afraid to tell you that I am an official fangirl for you/Erroneous/the Teal and Erroneous pairing/your inks/your absolutely SMOKIN' skills and perhaps also the exoskeleton-Erroneous. (You gotta admit... he looks pretty hot in that thing. xD)
I just want to say and overall wonderful job! And I can't wait for future submissiooonnnss...... *stalks*
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Stalker alert! Save me!!
Nah. Go ahead and stalk. I'm glad somebody's enjoying all this. And anyway I'm a raving advocate of the TealxErro pairing now...
If the tourney ends prematurely (as rumor has it), I may still continue this in an epilogue... We shall see.
And yes, the exoskeleton-look turned out rather... not bad... *hem*
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