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Published: 2015-05-26 09:20:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 5617; Favourites: 176; Downloads: 32
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The Beginning: Having reunited with her childhood friend Bat-Sheva before the war, Magdalene has found herself at an impasse, torn between the desire to protect her daughter from the Bachelors as she always has, and protecting the friend who was like a sister to her. With the battle over and the war only just beginning, Magdalene has kept to the forests surrounding the Bachelor herd as she wrestles with indecision. Meanwhile, Jones the Protector, suffering terrible injuries from the war, seeks Magdalene out. The mare does not know that they share the same blood, but Jones does, and their family ties are paramount to Jones' plan. I want you to join the Rangers, he tells her, and I will train you myself.
He has much to teach her, and very little time...
The sparring match was not going in Magdalene’s favor. She fought like a wildcat, angry and hissing, one part intimidation and the other raw instinct. There wasn’t any eloquence to it, just bestial fury. Jones was sure that the style, if it could be called such, had served her well against predators. But against a seasoned fighter like Q, the mare was falling painfully short. Q had a Ranger’s arsenal of tactics. He knew how to tuck into a foe with quick swipes of his teeth, how to strike them off balance with his hooves. He could tell when Magdalene was going to strike by the grimace she didn’t bother to hide, deftly dodging, not so much as a silver strand of his tail caught up in her teeth. He’d tag her as he went, nipping her shoulders or croup- not hard enough to break the skin, but enough to let her know that she’d be good and hurt if he did.
And it was infuriating her. Every time Q got a hit, her anger would grow. As the sun kissed the mountain range and turned their pelts various shades of gold, Magdalene became clumsier, letting her anger dictate her actions and make her more predictable. Jones could see that Q was getting frustrated himself, less and less willing to tag her. It was so easy as to be completely unfair.
“Stop.” Jones called, and they did, dust flurrying around their hooves. Magdalene was panting. Q was not. Indignation made the mare’s eyes unusually bright.
“Thank you.” The Protector told his comrade, dipping his head graciously. “I am sorry to have taken you away from your family for the evening. Please, go rest. I owe you for your help.”
Jones waited until Q was well out of earshot before he turned to his protege. Her pelt was damp with sweat, beading down her legs and plastering her short, scruffy mane to her throat. She was glaring at him, as though her exhaustion were entirely his fault.
Granted, it was, but she’d agreed to it.
“We have a lot of work to do if you’re to become a Ranger.” He told her. Magdalene was humble enough to stomp a hoof in an equine variant of a shrug, bobbing her head once in agreement. Jones regarded her favorably, but not too favorably, because her prospects were… well, they quite frankly made him want to beat his head into the nearest tree trunk.
Weeks. He had weeks, at most, to turn her into a formidable fighter.
Jones withheld a sigh. He would have to manage it. Somehow. If Magdalene could not fill his role, then Ziara…
No.
“Magdalene.” He said sharply. Gray eyes glanced up, skeptical and muzzle pursed, like she expected to be told to run a few miles around the field. Frankly, he would have prefered to meet her expectation than attempt what he was about to attempt. Motivational speeches were not the forte of a stallion who rarely socialized. But she needed it, he thought.
“There is a war plaguing Chevalin, and all across the islands, innocents are being pulled into the mayhem. Blood washes our fields red as lives are pointlessly lost in conflict. Are you going to watch from the sidelines? Could you live with yourself when the “what ifs” plague your every dream for the rest of your life?” He took a step forward, ears forward. Magdalene didn’t speak. “What are you doing to do, Magdalene? The ones you want to protect… your daughter, your friends. Are you willing to do everything in your power to enable yourself to guard their lives and that of others?” He settled her with a stare, golden eyes gleaming. The sun would have been less intense.
The appaloosa raised her head. Her nose was still scrunched, lips pursed. “You are being overdramatic.”
You goddamn spotted daughter of a--
“Answer the question.” He prompted, expression betraying nothing.
The appaloosa groaned and hung her head, too tired to bother with her posture. “Yes, or I wouldn’t be here.”
Jones supposed that was a good enough answer. “Then we’ll meet here again at dawn. Eat well beforehand, there won’t be another opportunity until midday.”
The only response was a grunt.
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Comments: 32
Shadzerios [2015-08-06 09:51:33 +0000 UTC]
Really love to read these roleplays of the group. I'm such a stalker here in the corner lmao. Just gonna say that I love how well you write these. Totally love all of this and hoping to read some more!
Oh I really would love to join CW but at the same time I feel somehow holding that urge. Mixed up feelings when I find something amazing and get really excited about it lol. xD
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queerly In reply to Shadzerios [2015-08-06 13:58:04 +0000 UTC]
I really hope you join a roleplay group sometime! You seem like a lovely person any group would love to have, and thank you for your sweet compliments!
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dry-oasis [2015-06-06 14:12:19 +0000 UTC]
This is so gorgeous I adore the very limited color palette and dramatic side lighting. The composition is great, really fun and interesting to look at. Those open pony mouth are perfection. Mm. yeah.
U CAN DO EET MAGS
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queerly In reply to dry-oasis [2015-06-12 06:22:33 +0000 UTC]
;o; Thank you so much dfkshfkjsd
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Tree-Branch [2015-05-27 18:01:07 +0000 UTC]
Wow this image is just fantastic ;u; I really love the blurred horses and how i draws you in deeper into the image. Really loving seeing so much art from you c:
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RusticLass [2015-05-26 15:56:05 +0000 UTC]
Good night is this absolutely amazing!!!
I can't get over Jones' face
he's so regal
and observant
and kind of annoyed all in one
it's beautiful
Q says
my beard is better than yours
also I totally didn't realize that I drew Q
in the same pose as mags
on his new ref
:'D OOPS
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queerly In reply to RusticLass [2015-05-27 04:50:27 +0000 UTC]
I
just realized they're in the same pose omg LOL
thank you ;;
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RusticLass In reply to queerly [2015-05-30 13:37:22 +0000 UTC]
I dun goofed up :'D
You're welcome! 8D
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Vivid-Myth [2015-05-26 15:05:51 +0000 UTC]
YOU GODDAMN DAUGHTER OF A-
nononono conceal dont feel jones
I'm trying jones
damnit jones we're doing the dialogue thing again. quick give her a convincing pokerface.
nailed it.
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ValiantShadow [2015-05-26 14:20:37 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing. The plot, the artwork, all of it. Just, yes.
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queerly In reply to ValiantShadow [2015-05-27 04:50:47 +0000 UTC]
huuuuue thank you MythicalPrancer helps with the plot a TON <3
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ValiantShadow In reply to queerly [2015-05-28 03:38:39 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad the two of you came up with this!
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BlueUnicornJ13 [2015-05-26 13:08:42 +0000 UTC]
Hgn! I'm loving this plot so much!
I love their expressions and the sense of movement in this. Not to mention that the entire thing makes me feel like I'm actually there watching Magdalene spar with Q.
Little Bird: Go, Mags! You can do it!
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queerly In reply to BlueUnicornJ13 [2015-05-27 04:51:07 +0000 UTC]
dfsdjfh thank you ;o;
Mags is getting her little spotty butt beat :'D
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BlueUnicornJ13 In reply to queerly [2015-05-27 12:39:58 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!~ <333
lol poor Mags. ;w;
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Katha88 [2015-05-26 11:38:47 +0000 UTC]
I love that composition, it pulls you so much deeper into the story. I am very excited to see so much of Magdalene! With all the new plots rising
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The-SnuffBox [2015-05-26 10:13:40 +0000 UTC]
Your art is truly amazing!
It looks like a screenshot out of an animation movie
I really like your equine style
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ArcanaMajor [2015-05-26 09:24:52 +0000 UTC]
Oooh, so much action! And that composition is just perfect. It works so well and Jones just looks great. (Also, background envy?)
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queerly In reply to ArcanaMajor [2015-05-27 04:51:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank yoooou once in a while I actually draw a background 8DD
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