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Published: 2012-01-11 01:44:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 137; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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People are like windowsSo transparent, and fake
It seems like no one knows
Who anybody is anymore.
This generation is doomed.
Doomed to repeat the mistakes of the past
Because instead of learning from them,
We ignore them, and take to the sky like Icarus.
Egotism runs rampant through our ranks.
People thinking that they can do whatever they want
Without thinking of the consequences.
What is our world coming to?
I don't know what the future holds for us,
but I don't think we'll like the outcome.
Maybe people will take a good hard look at the past
and swear not to live by those mistakes.
Or maybe not...
Comments: 6
AmandaMache [2012-01-11 03:59:00 +0000 UTC]
Ay caramba. I love your writing so much.
Remember how I told you how I was gonna rant about stuff? Well, I never really could put words to what I was feeling, but you've really done a good job here. Like, this is one of the main reasons I get so frustrated anymore.
What inspired you to write this?
I pretty much 100% agree with every word written here.
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quicksta4 In reply to AmandaMache [2012-01-11 04:02:30 +0000 UTC]
It just kinda crossed my mind when I was thinking about last year's English class. We were doing this "poetry competition" type thing, and we were given these really weird metaphors and similes that we had to turn into poems. Hence, "People are like windows" lol. And I'm glad you like it
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AmandaMache In reply to quicksta4 [2012-01-11 04:06:53 +0000 UTC]
That sounds fun. I love writing stuff like that but I'm not usually happy enough with my work to show it to people, and usually end up tossing it anyway haha.
I'm generally not bad with my words, but you make me feel like a moron ;-; hahahaha
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quicksta4 In reply to AmandaMache [2012-01-11 04:09:40 +0000 UTC]
Awh, I'm sure you don't sound like a moron At least I know you aren't one
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AmandaMache In reply to quicksta4 [2012-01-11 04:12:11 +0000 UTC]
Aw well thanks buddy hahaha
You're not a moron either.
xD
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