angelStained [2011-06-14 05:59:36 +0000 UTC]

Phoenix? I like how this is much of a symbol too- all of us can relate and reflect on it. The 'life' adds a hopeful tone to this as well.



#theWrittenRevolution | #SixWordStories 52 Week Challenge

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Mishelangello [2011-04-10 10:44:42 +0000 UTC]

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Solarune [2011-01-23 18:58:52 +0000 UTC]

Ooh. I really like this idea, although I'm not sure I would have associated it with green – more orange or red. But then, if you picture a sprout or a plant growing out of devastation, it makes sense. The first image I get when I read this is of a phoenix. Maybe that's just me
As for the story, I imagine something that's happening after a terrible disaster, or a war... It seems a little... unspecific, though. More like a saying or a statement than an actual story. Like, this could happen rather than this has happened. I mean, maybe if it said something specific rose from the ashes it would work better. It's pretty hard to play around with that in the constraints of the SWS format, though
Nice piece, anyway! I found this week's really hard too

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