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Randomization1998 — Life or Death
Published: 2014-03-10 20:05:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description It's life.
It isn't just life or death.
Do you think nobody cares?
Do you think you're the only one?
We just want to help. You can be saved.
Your cowardly vices?
They'll never help you.
I can't believe how selfish you've been.
Don't you think it would be a good plam,
to buck up your ideas?
Keeping to yourself isn't clever.
You make me sick.
Death.

Death?
You make me sick.
Keeping to yourself isn't clever.
To buck up your ideas -
don't you think it would be a good plan?
I can't believe how selfish you've been.
They'll never help you,
your cowardly vices.
We just want to help. You can be saved.
Do you think you're the only one?
Do you think nobody cares?
It isn't just life or death.
It's life.
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SydneyCoalMinerGirl [2014-03-10 20:07:58 +0000 UTC]

If this poem is about suicide (not sure if it is but I'm assuming so), it is not a selfish act. Yes, it is not a good idea, in fact it's a horrible idea, but not to the people who are in such misery that they end up doing so.

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Randomization1998 In reply to SydneyCoalMinerGirl [2014-03-10 20:37:34 +0000 UTC]

I know.  I'm suicidal myself.  Therefore, in the first half, it is how the suicidal person feels - I often feel like I must be selfish and stupid for feeling like I want todie but in the second half, my friends are saying that im daft snd I should accept help because they care.

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