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Published: 2009-01-18 17:57:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 637; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 2
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Description Do I love you? Do I like you? My friend, lover, foe?
The warm feeling I get, won't seem to go.
And yet now I question, your meaning to me.
Are you worth it? Are you for it?
Will you ever love me?
Should I keep my heart set? Should I even try?
And if I do, what will you? Will I break down and cry?
Will you tell me? Do you love me?
Is it on you I should fawn?
Or do you think maybe, That I should move on?
I'm lost in my feelings, Like a feather in a storm.
Twisting, Turning, Flickering, Burning,
Am I cold? Am I warm? Do I love you like I say?
Is this a game that we play? Is it true? Is it you?
You: a phase, true love, friend?
You: whom I say I might love 'till the end?
But do I?
Do I?
Love you?
Love...
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Comments: 38

DragonflameLord [2009-01-30 04:05:44 +0000 UTC]

o.O
whao... this is freacking deep!

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RandomKween In reply to DragonflameLord [2009-02-02 00:31:12 +0000 UTC]

Yay!!! Thanks super bro!

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DragonflameLord In reply to RandomKween [2009-02-02 23:20:10 +0000 UTC]

hehe! no prob super sis!

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KazeAshura [2009-01-25 20:30:09 +0000 UTC]

IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!!
You're like multi-talented!! Write more poems!! xDDD

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RandomKween In reply to KazeAshura [2009-02-02 00:34:34 +0000 UTC]

AWW! YAY! Thank you so much!!! I'm so glad! TTuTT You made my day!!!!!

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mippy13 [2009-01-21 03:29:38 +0000 UTC]

mel, that was so pretty!!!!!!!
i almost cried and not just cause i just stubbed my toe.

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RandomKween In reply to mippy13 [2009-01-22 23:37:08 +0000 UTC]

Haha!!! Thank you so much!!

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mippy13 In reply to RandomKween [2009-01-22 23:56:48 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome c:

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DP770 [2009-01-20 04:39:34 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, cool and kewl.

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RandomKween In reply to DP770 [2009-01-22 23:37:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!! YAYY!

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DP770 In reply to RandomKween [2009-01-23 02:36:42 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome. ^^

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CuteTreats [2009-01-19 20:21:31 +0000 UTC]

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!! You are an AMAZING poet!!! :0

"Twisting, Turning, Flickering, Burning,"
fav line right thurr
dont know why xD

I WANNA SEE MORE POEMS FROM YOUUU :0

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RandomKween In reply to CuteTreats [2009-01-22 23:39:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!! That made me so super happy!!!!!

nwn I'm so glad!!!

OMG!! YAY!!! Hopefully! XDDD

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CuteTreats In reply to RandomKween [2009-01-23 00:06:34 +0000 UTC]

YAY IM GLAD!

MOARR MOARR MOARRR

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BakaMichi [2009-01-19 05:10:21 +0000 UTC]

"I'm lost in my feelings, Like a feather in a storm"

That's the most beautiful metaphore I've read in a long time

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RandomKween In reply to BakaMichi [2009-01-22 23:39:59 +0000 UTC]

Aww!!! YAYY!! Thank you so much!!! I'm so glad you think so!!!!

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BakaMichi In reply to RandomKween [2009-01-23 05:56:34 +0000 UTC]

^_______^ NP Daughter!

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RosieGirl7 [2009-01-19 04:45:24 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! This poem is so beautiful! I mean it! >//w//<

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RandomKween In reply to RosieGirl7 [2009-01-22 23:40:19 +0000 UTC]

YAY! THANK YOU!!! I'm so glad you think so!!!!!

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RosieGirl7 In reply to RandomKween [2009-01-24 02:21:36 +0000 UTC]

Ur welcome!!!! ^//w//^

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100cotton [2009-01-19 03:39:53 +0000 UTC]

oh my jesus christ!!!
That gave me chills the whole time 0w0
Is this about who I think it's about? Wait...you can't read minds...I'll ask you on da phone tomorrow ^^
Anyways..this is such a beautiful poem!!

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RandomKween In reply to 100cotton [2009-01-22 23:41:02 +0000 UTC]

WHOA!!! lol!!! Thank you!!!!! XDDD
This was about...hmm...? I think it might've been timmy. But I wrote it last year so no promises!

YAYY! THANKS SMEXY!

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100cotton In reply to RandomKween [2009-01-24 19:21:17 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!
awww!!

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DigiFuMaster [2009-01-19 03:31:26 +0000 UTC]

Whoahsers, multitalenticated! Very nice poetry! Erm, scrapping later?.. banish the thought!

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RandomKween In reply to DigiFuMaster [2009-01-22 23:41:18 +0000 UTC]

WHOA!!! OMG!! Thank you so super much!!!!!
XDDDD
AWW!! thank you!!!!

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iceeFRESH [2009-01-19 03:24:20 +0000 UTC]

COOLIE! it gave me shivers, all the awesome rhymes and wat not!

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RandomKween In reply to iceeFRESH [2009-01-22 23:41:46 +0000 UTC]

OOO!! Shivers!!! Oh noes, icee!! You can't shiver xDDD

Thank you!!

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iceeFRESH In reply to RandomKween [2009-01-23 18:30:17 +0000 UTC]

HAHA LOL!! ur HILARIOUS!! ohh, what a good laugh!

ur welcome!

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ZoloGirl [2009-01-18 19:54:09 +0000 UTC]

Aww, my heart ached a bit there
Beautiful poem. I really hope to see more ^_^

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RandomKween In reply to ZoloGirl [2009-01-22 23:41:56 +0000 UTC]

AWW!! YAYY! thank you so much!! I'm so happy!!!!

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silentmoon913 [2009-01-18 19:00:33 +0000 UTC]

That's a really cool poem. ♥

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RandomKween In reply to silentmoon913 [2009-01-22 23:42:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so super muchies!!!!!

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silentmoon913 In reply to RandomKween [2009-01-22 23:50:57 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome ^^

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cappyandpashy4ever [2009-01-18 18:05:52 +0000 UTC]

^^ That was sweet and kinda sad...love is confusing isn't it?

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RandomKween In reply to cappyandpashy4ever [2009-01-22 23:42:19 +0000 UTC]

YAYY! OMG!! Thank you so much!!! yes, yes it is!!!!

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Despereaux-7 [2009-01-18 18:01:59 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwww
:'O
its so beautiful!
ooo im goin to cryyyyy
s-very odd that this is exactly how i feel atm~
haha
very very beautiful though~
good job
: )

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RandomKween In reply to Despereaux-7 [2009-01-22 23:42:54 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!!! THANK YOU!! O///O
oh really?!!! gah!! I get like this all the time!!!

Thank you again!!!

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Despereaux-7 In reply to RandomKween [2009-01-23 03:16:27 +0000 UTC]

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