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Published: 2009-01-18 17:57:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 637; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 2
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Do I love you? Do I like you? My friend, lover, foe?The warm feeling I get, won't seem to go.
And yet now I question, your meaning to me.
Are you worth it? Are you for it?
Will you ever love me?
Should I keep my heart set? Should I even try?
And if I do, what will you? Will I break down and cry?
Will you tell me? Do you love me?
Is it on you I should fawn?
Or do you think maybe, That I should move on?
I'm lost in my feelings, Like a feather in a storm.
Twisting, Turning, Flickering, Burning,
Am I cold? Am I warm? Do I love you like I say?
Is this a game that we play? Is it true? Is it you?
You: a phase, true love, friend?
You: whom I say I might love 'till the end?
But do I?
Do I?
Love you?
Love...
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Comments: 38
RandomKween In reply to DragonflameLord [2009-02-02 00:31:12 +0000 UTC]
Yay!!! Thanks super bro!
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DragonflameLord In reply to RandomKween [2009-02-02 23:20:10 +0000 UTC]
hehe! no prob super sis!
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KazeAshura [2009-01-25 20:30:09 +0000 UTC]
IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!!
You're like multi-talented!! Write more poems!! xDDD
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RandomKween In reply to KazeAshura [2009-02-02 00:34:34 +0000 UTC]
AWW! YAY! Thank you so much!!! I'm so glad! TTuTT You made my day!!!!!
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mippy13 [2009-01-21 03:29:38 +0000 UTC]
mel, that was so pretty!!!!!!!
i almost cried and not just cause i just stubbed my toe.
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CuteTreats [2009-01-19 20:21:31 +0000 UTC]
THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!! You are an AMAZING poet!!! :0
"Twisting, Turning, Flickering, Burning,"
fav line right thurr
dont know why xD
I WANNA SEE MORE POEMS FROM YOUUU :0
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RandomKween In reply to CuteTreats [2009-01-22 23:39:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!!!! That made me so super happy!!!!!
nwn I'm so glad!!!
OMG!! YAY!!! Hopefully! XDDD
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CuteTreats In reply to RandomKween [2009-01-23 00:06:34 +0000 UTC]
YAY IM GLAD!
MOARR MOARR MOARRR
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BakaMichi [2009-01-19 05:10:21 +0000 UTC]
"I'm lost in my feelings, Like a feather in a storm"
That's the most beautiful metaphore I've read in a long time
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RandomKween In reply to BakaMichi [2009-01-22 23:39:59 +0000 UTC]
Aww!!! YAYY!! Thank you so much!!! I'm so glad you think so!!!!
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RosieGirl7 [2009-01-19 04:45:24 +0000 UTC]
AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! This poem is so beautiful! I mean it! >//w//<
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RandomKween In reply to RosieGirl7 [2009-01-22 23:40:19 +0000 UTC]
YAY! THANK YOU!!! I'm so glad you think so!!!!!
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100cotton [2009-01-19 03:39:53 +0000 UTC]
oh my jesus christ!!!
That gave me chills the whole time 0w0
Is this about who I think it's about? Wait...you can't read minds...I'll ask you on da phone tomorrow ^^
Anyways..this is such a beautiful poem!!
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RandomKween In reply to 100cotton [2009-01-22 23:41:02 +0000 UTC]
WHOA!!! lol!!! Thank you!!!!! XDDD
This was about...hmm...? I think it might've been timmy. But I wrote it last year so no promises!
YAYY! THANKS SMEXY!
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DigiFuMaster [2009-01-19 03:31:26 +0000 UTC]
Whoahsers, multitalenticated! Very nice poetry! Erm, scrapping later?.. banish the thought!
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RandomKween In reply to DigiFuMaster [2009-01-22 23:41:18 +0000 UTC]
WHOA!!! OMG!! Thank you so super much!!!!!
XDDDD
AWW!! thank you!!!!
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iceeFRESH [2009-01-19 03:24:20 +0000 UTC]
COOLIE! it gave me shivers, all the awesome rhymes and wat not!
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RandomKween In reply to iceeFRESH [2009-01-22 23:41:46 +0000 UTC]
OOO!! Shivers!!! Oh noes, icee!! You can't shiver xDDD
Thank you!!
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iceeFRESH In reply to RandomKween [2009-01-23 18:30:17 +0000 UTC]
HAHA LOL!! ur HILARIOUS!! ohh, what a good laugh!
ur welcome!
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ZoloGirl [2009-01-18 19:54:09 +0000 UTC]
Aww, my heart ached a bit there
Beautiful poem. I really hope to see more ^_^
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RandomKween In reply to ZoloGirl [2009-01-22 23:41:56 +0000 UTC]
AWW!! YAYY! thank you so much!! I'm so happy!!!!
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RandomKween In reply to silentmoon913 [2009-01-22 23:42:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so super muchies!!!!!
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silentmoon913 In reply to RandomKween [2009-01-22 23:50:57 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome ^^
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cappyandpashy4ever [2009-01-18 18:05:52 +0000 UTC]
^^ That was sweet and kinda sad...love is confusing isn't it?
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RandomKween In reply to cappyandpashy4ever [2009-01-22 23:42:19 +0000 UTC]
YAYY! OMG!! Thank you so much!!! yes, yes it is!!!!
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Despereaux-7 [2009-01-18 18:01:59 +0000 UTC]
awwwwwww
:'O
its so beautiful!
ooo im goin to cryyyyy
s-very odd that this is exactly how i feel atm~
haha
very very beautiful though~
good job
: )
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RandomKween In reply to Despereaux-7 [2009-01-22 23:42:54 +0000 UTC]
OMG!!!! THANK YOU!! O///O
oh really?!!! gah!! I get like this all the time!!!
Thank you again!!!
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