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Published: 2016-11-13 03:36:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 222; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description I had fun with this, I don't draw male physiques often because they're kind of flat, but this helped me learn --at least-- a little bit more about it. Sir Dash is one character I admire most with how proper he has to be.


This is what he usually wears; anything formal. If you are nice to him, he will be nice back, and do anything to make you happy if you are having a bad day. He used to be adventurous, but now just prefers to spend his time reading philosophical books, and fantasy novels. 


He prefers to be can Mr. Squiggle Dash rather than anything else, but if you insist on calling him 'Sir', he won't correct you.

His best friend through his life is Lethius (I'm sure I will end up drawing him soon too looking dapper af).

 
Critique Welcome! Please?

Anyways, have a great day.

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Comments: 5

TTheFaceless [2016-11-13 16:25:46 +0000 UTC]

Scriggle squiggle squable ~~~

Okay! For my two cents(and adding onto what the guy below said)

For this peice I agree with that darker shading would help! I also think that the gleam in the hair shouldn't just be a squiggly line, or maybe you can make it more blurry...? I guess. The face and ears are well done, as is the folds in the clothing, but one of the shoulders seems to be wider than the rest, and the head seems a bit too big for the body.

Now for the background. I love it! The color scheme and the simple geometric shapes doesn't distract from the character. It reminds me of to be honest...

The only major problem I have is, because the colors are so bright, a darker shading would help greatly. Overall, great work!

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RandomPaperWork In reply to TTheFaceless [2016-11-13 18:18:16 +0000 UTC]

I'll try to not be afraid of shading from now on. I knew when I was drawing it, that one shoulder looked off. And, my gosh--You're right--the HEAD! It's so big! Thank you for telling me that. Shading- got it. I knew I was missing something. Thank you for the critique, friend.

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TTheFaceless In reply to RandomPaperWork [2016-11-13 18:24:07 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Glad it helped!

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the-Doodle-chan [2016-11-13 12:31:04 +0000 UTC]

The drawing is good. This is a well proportioned figure and the expression appears calm and kind. However, it could use a little more shade. Don't be afraid to use darker colors to shade. I would suggest moving the color wheel mouse to the left or right (depending on if you want lighter or darker colors) and then moving the other mouse in the gradient box (I think that's what it's called) diagonally upwards or downwards (again, this depends on whether you want lighter or darker shades). I hope that helped, and I'm sorry if I didn't explain it well. I'm terrible at that XD

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RandomPaperWork In reply to the-Doodle-chan [2016-11-13 18:13:25 +0000 UTC]

I think I understand. I'll try to be more confident with shading. Having a tablet does make it easier, after all. Thank you!

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