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RatherDevious — Fading Away by-sa

Published: 2014-02-04 03:28:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 3320; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 7
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Description 'For the pain and the sorrow... caused by my mistakes...
Won't repent to a mortal whom is all to blame,
Now I know I won't make it,
There will be a time we'll get back our freedom,
They can't break what's inside

I'll face it 'cause it's the heart of everything...

Open up your eyes!
Save yourself from fading away now! Don't let it go!
Open up your eyes!
See what you've become, don't sacrifice!
It's truly the heart of everything!...'

- The Heart of Everything - Within Temptation

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Comments: 17

hentaispyder [2014-03-13 20:02:20 +0000 UTC]

I would like to think that a stage this advance would only come about if twilight was struck down.
Not so much in a shipping sense but a 'I see my Best friend on the ground bleeding, I'm going to beat you until there isn't enough meat left to squirt blood when I hit it' sense. Of course somepony is going to stop him (maybe fluttershy) and they would get struck as well snapping spike out of it before he breaks into tears at the monster he's become.
Or something.

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UltraPredAlien [2014-02-16 06:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Looks like Spike was corrupted by dark magic. I had a story where he had been, leaves and returns when he thinks he has it in control. Then one life threatening moment to his friends. Boom its back with a vengeance. No matter the outcome his friends are a little afraid of him and this enrages him more. Even if they say their not afraid he can smell it on them, a constant reminder of these white lies. This torrent of emotion fuels the darker side more, to the point it staring to devour his soul.

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nickmon12 In reply to UltraPredAlien [2014-03-18 02:07:22 +0000 UTC]

What happened to the story? Or we're can I find it.

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UltraPredAlien In reply to nickmon12 [2014-03-21 14:59:15 +0000 UTC]

Hadn't had time to write it, on my to-do list of things I want to do.

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nickmon12 In reply to UltraPredAlien [2014-03-22 17:07:27 +0000 UTC]

The story is very inserting i hope you make it soon

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dragonmorpheus [2014-02-07 06:11:26 +0000 UTC]

You seem to have a thing for Spike becoming corrupted.

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RatherDevious In reply to dragonmorpheus [2014-02-07 14:09:08 +0000 UTC]

I'm not hearing a complaint~

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dragonmorpheus In reply to RatherDevious [2014-02-08 02:26:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm not complaining, either. In fact, I can sort of picture Spike having this dark energy within him that takes over when he's pushed too far.

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RatherDevious In reply to dragonmorpheus [2014-02-08 02:42:50 +0000 UTC]

I fancy the idea; the poor little tyke, morphing into a twisted satire of his former self.

Oh, the savagery...

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dragonmorpheus In reply to RatherDevious [2014-02-08 03:49:46 +0000 UTC]

 I would at least like for him to be able to recognize who his friends are during it. It's his enemies that need to worry.

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RatherDevious In reply to dragonmorpheus [2014-02-08 04:08:18 +0000 UTC]

The words 'Blinded by rage' play a heavy role in his character. Well, his 'corrupt' character.

...but I fancy him wounding his friend(s) and 'coming back' after stopping mid-strike to a crying/afraid friend. Or "friend".

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dcblackstar In reply to RatherDevious [2014-02-28 23:00:26 +0000 UTC]

our little boys growing up   

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dragoncommander [2014-02-04 07:33:53 +0000 UTC]

so, in this universe spike didnt killed Sombra and he got possessed ?

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RatherDevious In reply to dragoncommander [2014-02-04 07:59:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh? Didn't think about it that way...

...sure~

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dcblackstar In reply to RatherDevious [2014-02-28 23:00:26 +0000 UTC]

our little boys growing up.   

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gumballkitty [2014-02-04 05:06:17 +0000 UTC]

Is that Spike?  

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RatherDevious In reply to gumballkitty [2014-02-04 05:15:05 +0000 UTC]

Well, it was

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