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Raychello — 5 LessonsI Learned From You
Published: 2009-02-14 21:08:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 269; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description 1.
everyone is insecure. and even
though you say you aren't, I know
it's true because you ask these
questions like, "am I good enough
to be loved?" and most of the time
I say yes, but lately I've been
thinking and

2.
you like to nitpick.  You'll take my
words and twist them and rap
them around each other and
braid them together and tie them
in a noose around my neck and
pull tight and

3.
criticism hurts, but I guess I didn't
just learn that from you, but you
certainly contributed and

4.
blood isn't the only thing coursing
through my veins. There's anger
and fear and resentment and
adrenaline and life and sharp bits
of glass and

5.
I am a good person and
Words hurt and

I am stronger than I thought and

I don't deserve to be treated like
this and
I am stronger than I thought and

I am stronger than you think.
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Comments: 10

notsovulnerable [2009-05-13 23:40:38 +0000 UTC]

"You'll take my
words and twist them and rap
them around each other and
braid them together and tie them
in a noose around my neck and
pull tight and

3.
criticism hurts, but I guess I didn't
just learn that from you, but you
certainly contributed"


Wonderful. You combine words beautifully.

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Raychello In reply to notsovulnerable [2009-05-14 00:25:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you! That means a lot.

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notsovulnerable In reply to Raychello [2009-05-14 03:04:21 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome.

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losingmyfaith [2009-04-03 03:07:52 +0000 UTC]

this is really good. raw and very just to the point. i love it

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Raychello In reply to losingmyfaith [2009-04-03 15:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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losingmyfaith In reply to Raychello [2009-04-04 01:19:24 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome!

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ohsostarryeyed [2009-02-18 17:40:58 +0000 UTC]

lovely! the first part was my favourite

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Raychello In reply to ohsostarryeyed [2009-02-19 00:19:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!

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xx-tokyosweets [2009-02-15 14:39:36 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely! The repetition is very nicely used here. Sorry, also, that I haven't been a great watcher recently.... :/

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Raychello In reply to xx-tokyosweets [2009-02-15 18:16:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the compliment!
don't worry. I have piles of deviations stored up, waiting for me to look at them. I'm so lazy .

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