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Published: 2011-12-13 01:01:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 274; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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Description "Enjoy life. I'll see you later."
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Comments: 7

3wyl [2012-02-15 13:03:15 +0000 UTC]

Woah... o.O

Nice, casual. I kind of like it, but then if someone said that to me, someone that meant a lot to me, it would be a bit rude... and offensive?

Depends how you interpret it, really.

I like how you have phrased this and I think it's cool how straight-forward and real it is, like you can actually imagine this happening.

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RayvenWorks In reply to 3wyl [2012-02-15 15:33:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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leoraigarath [2011-12-16 14:25:09 +0000 UTC]

Well. technically they say that the title should be blank or else it's not a 6-word story (and you must admit there's a point to it), still - it's well written and I really liked it! Well done.

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RayvenWorks In reply to leoraigarath [2011-12-16 14:46:35 +0000 UTC]

Actually, they say titles are not added to the count if the story makes sense on its own. Thanks for the support!

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saevuswinds [2011-12-15 22:11:39 +0000 UTC]

Wow, what six words can say...

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RayvenWorks In reply to saevuswinds [2011-12-15 22:15:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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saevuswinds In reply to RayvenWorks [2011-12-15 22:28:13 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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