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Published: 2010-06-03 17:23:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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She's running; Trying to get awayThey're chasing; Trying to catch up
She drops her bag; Less weight, more speed
They throw; Missing each time
She's slowing down; Out of breath
They grin; Finally catching up
She's hit; Screams out in pain
They hit; Laughing at her pain
She falls; Tries to get up
They got her; kicks her back down
She screams; Trying to get free
They laugh; Hitting her and hitting her
She stops struggling; Finally giving in
They hit her harder and harder; Enjoying it
She sees a foot; Everything black
They hit her still; Stop
She's not moving; Motionless
They check her pulse; Nothing there
She's dead; At a young age
They killed; At a young age
Blood has been spilled this day; over favored color
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Wow... you have quite the talent for writing... but, STOP MAKING ME CRY DARNIT!!!! [link]
I used to (and still do) have the same problem at my school... I was beaten up and broken so many times... I was tough (at least in will, my body is as fragile as Simon Cowell's good mood) ,but I couldn't take it all... one day after losing the one person who ever brought me any joy... I had planned that night to take my own life, but I grit my teeth with tears flooding my eyes that I wouldn't stop til I beat this... I will not be just another statistic... I will be the variable that changes the whole equation (you can already tell I'm quite the nerd, >.< (crappy math puns)) .. I've been fighting ever since to make this world just a bit brighter... to never give up on what I believe in, but this wasn't enough... I just couldn't find the strength.. Until one day, I met another girl, a precious little kitty named Elly, who brought me more comfort, more joy than I could ever have imagined... I love her so very much... no matter what.. I will never give up as long as I have her...
yeah.. I'm sorry.. I like to ramble sometimes.. >.<
great poem though.. ^^
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Sorry for making you cry!
I know how you feel. I was moments away from ending my own life at one point, but I just told myself to wait a little longer, if it doesn't get any better, then I'll just have to keep trying. And like you, my life was saved by someone too. He was an amazing person, he made me feel good about myself and no matter what kind of negative mood I was in, he'd make me smile and laugh. But then I had to mess it up and then ended up moving. Now he is with someone else. I'm still living though. I have great friends that keep me from crawling in my little hole again.
Now I'm sorry for rambling!
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