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relativecosmicmusing — Cellared Bliss
Published: 2007-06-08 12:10:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Sorrow held at a distance, fades
Quickly with a crunch of time
As if the drizzling fog that
Fizzles passion, sounding
Like grey hissing smoke
When rain interrupts
Though unplanned,
An evening fire:
Just ends.

Indoors, alone
Shades drawn against
The brilliance of dark night
Moons & memories illuminate
Those once washed shores of my
Heart:  where you faced your vulnerability
With the soft, glowing warmth of blinding love
Where no light dared cast upon the trite flaws of
Our being, yet dodged doubtful shadows with edges
More rough than jagged jesting could see how … once
With serenity – safe, like caring gloves, they had puzzle-fit.

A new spring rides with gentle touch and friendly kiss
Sharp, doubtful edges seem polished smooth by
Light grains of wit upon the wind that dried
The tears of time.  So corked for aging,
For reminiscing:  the mingled-sweet
Elixir of a lasting love, waiting
Cellared in the depth of my
Heart.  As it intoxicates
This bliss, as your
Kiss reminds me:
Who you are.
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Comments: 10

relativecosmicmusing [2011-08-04 00:20:08 +0000 UTC]

I write like H. P. Lovecraft. Proof: [link]

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Corpse-Warrior [2007-06-15 14:16:47 +0000 UTC]

I can feel that peace you speak of. I can feel it lulling me to just lay down and relax and let it soak in. This poems voice is so quiet, yet so friendly and confident.

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to Corpse-Warrior [2007-06-16 11:32:34 +0000 UTC]

that is precisely where it's written from .... and where it's headed .... my wish (as always) for everyone is that i could encourage that feeling ... your words brought a smile to my face Andrew ... Thank You!

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Corpse-Warrior In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2007-06-16 13:02:00 +0000 UTC]

Life comes in cycles. Everyone experiences periods of peace

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to Corpse-Warrior [2007-06-17 13:04:29 +0000 UTC]

and i strive to alter my perception to experience them more often.

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Corpse-Warrior In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2007-06-17 19:46:36 +0000 UTC]

I have a far darker view of things my friend. But I still love you

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to Corpse-Warrior [2007-06-21 17:20:33 +0000 UTC]

i'm not worried .... i know your perception ... your outlook is evolving and expanding .... and I still love you too

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Corpse-Warrior In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2007-06-21 17:26:32 +0000 UTC]

YAY

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autumn-wind [2007-06-08 23:02:15 +0000 UTC]

this is really beautiful ^^

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to autumn-wind [2007-06-09 14:54:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks my dear!

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