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Published: 2006-03-01 17:00:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 96; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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Description trying to tell someone .... how deeply i feel ....

Only after the allowing
Comes the peace
Only after the patience
Comes the understanding

Walking through ordinary memories
I twist & turn
Stumbling over
Block after block
…beginning, all … to look the same
…all, bearing part of my name!

Expressions…not unlike fears
Emotions…not unlike tears

As awakening draws near and clear…
ull off the vest!
…defile the guise
lay one more string
(a single note?)
and reach way back
*clearing his throat*
sing into my thoughts…
…the dreams that you see
veiled in humour & insanity
- you & me –
take hold my hand
clutch it straight to your chest
and sing to the universe:
ridiculously loud
- this . is . not . a . test –
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Comments: 15

SLB25 [2006-03-02 19:54:04 +0000 UTC]

This is well written and in powerful details...
these words really got my attention....
I was able to feel what your words painted...
Is that a picture of U ?
Nice job!

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to SLB25 [2006-03-02 21:57:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

yep...that's me in the tub - cleaning up after shooting pics for the "colour your face contest" & scottjamesprebbles call out for bodies

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SLB25 In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2006-03-03 01:45:26 +0000 UTC]

WELCOME

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GuruX [2006-03-02 09:36:24 +0000 UTC]

the spirit is waiting for your affirmation,
only if you decide you will receive something from the universe.. (from your self)

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to GuruX [2006-03-02 12:41:12 +0000 UTC]

so very very true!

THANK YOU!

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GuruX In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2006-03-02 12:42:41 +0000 UTC]

nono, i had to thank, cause this are your words wich inspire others

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to GuruX [2006-03-02 12:46:47 +0000 UTC]

awwh......thanks

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Lobotomized [2006-03-01 19:32:44 +0000 UTC]

This is the second time I watch your deviation and I still have difficulties to translate "allowing"...

In addition, this is deep ! So mysterious too... (Especially for a non English mother-tongue guy.)

But I'm quite sure the whole feeling it diperses is very nice

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to Lobotomized [2006-03-01 20:01:13 +0000 UTC]

well ... then you'll just have to take my word for it ... it sends him the message ... and he is a very smart boy!

et je pense qu'il entende... nous n'comprennon l'un l'autre ... mais bon... a cet egarde... qui sait!?

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Lobotomized In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2006-03-01 22:19:21 +0000 UTC]

Let's hope he will catch it...

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to Lobotomized [2006-03-01 22:50:15 +0000 UTC]

just in case he doesn't ...maybe i should take some beer & tubing...eh?!

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Lobotomized In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2006-03-01 23:56:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, U can think about this idea... lol

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braveheart06 [2006-03-01 18:28:16 +0000 UTC]

I wish you the very best!

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to braveheart06 [2006-03-01 19:00:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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braveheart06 In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2006-03-01 19:08:44 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome.

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