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trying to tell someone .... how deeply i feel ....Only after the allowing
Comes the peace
Only after the patience
Comes the understanding
Walking through ordinary memories
I twist & turn
Stumbling over
Block after block
…beginning, all … to look the same
…all, bearing part of my name!
Expressions…not unlike fears
Emotions…not unlike tears
As awakening draws near and clear…
…
…defile the guise
…
(a single note?)
and reach way back
*clearing his throat*
sing into my thoughts…
…the dreams that you see
veiled in humour & insanity
- you & me –
take hold my hand
clutch it straight to your chest
and sing to the universe:
ridiculously loud
- this . is . not . a . test –
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Comments: 15
SLB25 [2006-03-02 19:54:04 +0000 UTC]
This is well written and in powerful details...
these words really got my attention....
I was able to feel what your words painted...
Is that a picture of U ?
Nice job!
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relativecosmicmusing In reply to SLB25 [2006-03-02 21:57:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
yep...that's me in the tub - cleaning up after shooting pics for the "colour your face contest" & scottjamesprebbles call out for bodies
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GuruX [2006-03-02 09:36:24 +0000 UTC]
the spirit is waiting for your affirmation,
only if you decide you will receive something from the universe.. (from your self)
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relativecosmicmusing In reply to GuruX [2006-03-02 12:41:12 +0000 UTC]
so very very true!
THANK YOU!
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GuruX In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2006-03-02 12:42:41 +0000 UTC]
nono, i had to thank, cause this are your words wich inspire others
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Lobotomized [2006-03-01 19:32:44 +0000 UTC]
This is the second time I watch your deviation and I still have difficulties to translate "allowing"...
In addition, this is deep ! So mysterious too... (Especially for a non English mother-tongue guy.)
But I'm quite sure the whole feeling it diperses is very nice
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relativecosmicmusing In reply to Lobotomized [2006-03-01 20:01:13 +0000 UTC]
well ... then you'll just have to take my word for it ... it sends him the message ... and he is a very smart boy!
et je pense qu'il entende... nous n'comprennon l'un l'autre ... mais bon... a cet egarde... qui sait!?
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Lobotomized In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2006-03-01 22:19:21 +0000 UTC]
Let's hope he will catch it...
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relativecosmicmusing In reply to Lobotomized [2006-03-01 22:50:15 +0000 UTC]
just in case he doesn't ...maybe i should take some beer & tubing...eh?!
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Lobotomized In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2006-03-01 23:56:03 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, U can think about this idea... lol
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braveheart06 In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2006-03-01 19:08:44 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome.
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