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Destroyed from the inside outBroken from the top down
Crushed from the beginning
Wrecked til the end
It's called a heart break
and it beats to a different rhythm
It bounces all over the place
as it begs for some control
It crashes and bangs into every wall
Pounding and breaking more as it jumps
Crushing every emotion, every bit of sanity
The heart break destroys what you were
It creates a new person from the inside
As it drags tears from you, the erratic beat
twists and turns like a seraded edge against your breath
The heart break continues to tear apart what you once were
As your walls come down a determined thought rushes into you
With each and every blow from the broken heart,
Your insides begin to rebuild and divide
Dividing the hurt from the lessons
Encouragement to move on,
The heart break languidly diminishes
The destroyed you becomes a "was"
And your life and love become new
You think for a moment and understand
That to create who you will be, it takes pain
and heart break, and destruction.
You understand now that to be who you will be
you had to be who you weren't.
And only that fact could teach you the lessons
needed to grow and mature
To become who you need to be.
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Comments: 11
VolatileEvil [2007-05-24 19:05:37 +0000 UTC]
have a thought maybe to become who you want to be? or destined to become? to finally find your purpose kinda of thing?
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remembermywords In reply to VolatileEvil [2007-05-24 21:40:21 +0000 UTC]
good thinkin! how about now?
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VolatileEvil [2007-05-24 19:03:26 +0000 UTC]
personally i love this one, think the lesson conveyed in it is very true and something i've experienced myself and felt the same way about and i've never been able to put it in words, i quite like the ending aswell but will give it a few read throughs when i'm finished with my exams to see if i can come up with any ideas for you. think you should be proud of this one, really heart felt and honest and inspring
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remembermywords In reply to VolatileEvil [2007-05-24 21:36:31 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much! im glad you liked it
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Nynyam [2007-05-24 07:01:21 +0000 UTC]
Man, have I felt like that before ::
I love the whole thing
It finishes it off really nicely!!
Great work
^_^
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remembermywords In reply to Nynyam [2007-05-24 10:50:34 +0000 UTC]
im glad you like it, although im sorry to hear that you've felt like that before heart breaks deffinately arent a good feeling lol
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Nynyam In reply to remembermywords [2007-05-24 11:43:24 +0000 UTC]
Not atall
But you captured the feelings... beautifully in a way
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1evilwolf [2007-05-24 01:21:25 +0000 UTC]
well its good and I personally like all of it and I wouldn't change it, but that's just preference and it depicts the emotion very well and you worded it very well. It was a pleasure to read it
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