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Published: 2004-05-08 08:59:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 29
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Description Do not try to read this,
You may hurt your eyes.
Do not try to read this,
The words are in disguise.
This is how my mind works,
Screams lost in the dark.
This is how my heart works,
Singing maps like a spark.
These words mean something else,
But you will never guess.
You'd have better luck
Playing speedrummypokerchess.
But in my mind this works.
The maze is quickly solved
My heart sings not alone.
Became ochestra; evolved.
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Comments: 11

bluedolphin1 [2004-06-08 12:46:05 +0000 UTC]

I love both....

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bladerain [2004-05-22 21:15:53 +0000 UTC]

Great!
Short and direct. Works great and sounds even better.

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Remote-Spook In reply to bladerain [2004-05-23 06:34:11 +0000 UTC]

where have you been!!!!

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gothickitty-agent101 [2004-05-11 01:03:32 +0000 UTC]

I think that this poem is about you. In the time that I've known you and been evolving. I am glad to know the you that you have become. You become more independant every day. Maybe I'm crazy but I do love the woman you are and will evolve into. That's why your my best friend. If only you were a guy.

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Remote-Spook In reply to gothickitty-agent101 [2004-05-11 02:48:58 +0000 UTC]

if i were a guy... your poor honey would be all alone... well that's if i were a guy and was straight right? or um.... confused! hahaha smooch!

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gothickitty-agent101 In reply to Remote-Spook [2004-05-13 07:13:14 +0000 UTC]

He would too. Guess he's better off.

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azrael0033 [2004-05-10 02:52:08 +0000 UTC]

popcorn. that's what i think. popping thought bubbles. all the letters falling on your head. it's amazing how they arrange themselves.

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Remote-Spook In reply to azrael0033 [2004-05-10 04:57:29 +0000 UTC]

you'd be surprised haha

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LordOfSenses [2004-05-09 04:48:50 +0000 UTC]

cool, it's deep, like a fish.

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Remote-Spook In reply to LordOfSenses [2004-05-09 04:53:33 +0000 UTC]

yay!! but i can't swim

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LordOfSenses In reply to Remote-Spook [2004-05-09 04:55:27 +0000 UTC]

*throws rowboat*

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