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Remote-Spook — My Power
Published: 2004-03-10 10:42:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Description Control, you think you have it so.
You THINK, but it's false hope.
I know.
You chase to pour pestilence in me.
Fool!
How is it that you cannot see?
I’VE already infected YOU and your mind.
You look so hard to see.
You're STILL blind!
You made many rules, but I follow them not.
YOU, though, are bound by them.
YOUR caught.
Trying to put me together with glue
But it is I who is unraveling
YOU.
Your every plan has spilled on the floor.
But pursue me you STILL do much more
Each step you take fills with pools of denial
That each game I play is of an infinite child.
You dream of ME as the captured one
As YOU sleep inside YOUR own prison.
You HAVE no control.
Can’t you SEE?
Every move YOU make is because of ME!
But when you see MY strength in EVERY flame,
You'll know right then that YOU’RE to blame
For that unreachable goal to control MY power
Is factually,
INDEED,
What made YOU so sour.
So suffocate or
Suffix to say
That, sorry,
This just ISN’T your day.
So accept my apology as you try to catch breath,
But you can't have MY power of surviving YOUR death.
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Comments: 6

soulwrai [2004-03-19 10:00:34 +0000 UTC]

this is great work I like how you wrote this nicely done piece

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KarmaGhost [2004-03-11 07:43:13 +0000 UTC]

Mmm...I might've put in "spoken word". But then again, all my stuff is spoken word...so...~shrugs~. As to the piece itself: amazing conglomeration of varying ideas relating to one theme and one conclusion. This makes a real statement. Great work. ¬¬ Sounds like my mother... Oh well, I like this.

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kaoru-himura [2004-03-11 06:45:29 +0000 UTC]

sweet!! yeah I like the message.

"You made many rules, but I follow them not.
YOU, though, are bound by them.
YOUR caught."

hellz yeah! :headbangs:

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gothickitty-agent101 [2004-03-10 18:55:04 +0000 UTC]

Is this about who I think it is? Cause if it is kudios, you captured her. You're so talented!

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azrael0033 [2004-03-10 11:45:57 +0000 UTC]

wicked smoothness to the core. I'm likin' it becuz of the assertiveness. Draw to your vicinity all energy. Verbalize each command as a sonic manifestation of your divine will. What results is a reaction of cosmic proportions all within the laws of nature. The number 8 represents the material world according to the kabbalists. There are 8 families in the periodic table of elements. Sound waves are related in OCTAVES. Leary's own eight fold model of consciousness. Down to the very structure of our DNA! ... I forgot where I was going with this.... oh yeah, I was born on 8/28/80. The infinity sign is sideways.

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Remote-Spook In reply to azrael0033 [2004-03-10 16:07:42 +0000 UTC]

hehhehe that is soooo spiffy!!! i never actually thought about it. figures that my favorite number would be a little off then (9). hehehehe.

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