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Remote-Spook — Nothing At All
Published: 2004-02-25 08:42:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 128; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 13
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Description Tire tracks, the only sign he was ever there
But she doesn’t see them
He didn’t stay, and she never knew he waited
There’s no time to look for him
No reason to try
She can’t find herself, so he doesn’t exist
The petals crumbled, his flowers died
She never breathed their fragrance
She feels no guilt over his non-existing heartbreak
He feels emptiness where her love never was

Echoing into reality
All dreams fall
He feels, she feels
Nothing at all

Last night he kissed another’s forbidden lips
A week ago tonight she felt another’s touch
Together three years
Forever apart
Their merge separates, splits no hearts
The feeling is gone, the spark has dimmed
They talk, they listen, confess no pain
The ties that bind too loose to grip
The river splits, the streams flow on
The jagged rocks too eroded to cut

Echoing into reality
All dreams fall
He feel, she feels
Nothing at all
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Comments: 13

soulwrai [2004-02-29 10:56:17 +0000 UTC]

this is great work....love can bite..and often does lol

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Remote-Spook In reply to soulwrai [2004-03-01 05:00:24 +0000 UTC]

wouldn't really know haven't been there yet

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KarmaGhost [2004-02-26 06:18:51 +0000 UTC]

Amazing...like your "twinny-twin's" work, it's so simple...and tells a story so old that it's almost unfathomable. As always, your little repeat keeps me raptured. It doesn't sound forced. It works. It reminds me of a song by my favorite band in the world (simply known by Vertical Horizon)...life goes on, you're still there, you won't know why they left, you won't know what happened...but you're still there. I truly applaud this. Kudos.

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Remote-Spook In reply to KarmaGhost [2004-02-26 06:21:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much i was trying to make it like a song. but i wrote it cuz i've seen so many people try soo hard for someone and that person never seeing it cuz they were wrapped up in themselves. it's sad.

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LordOfSenses [2004-02-26 05:31:37 +0000 UTC]

*shiver* *gets blanket* damn it's cold here!
i really like the little repeat.

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LordOfSenses In reply to LordOfSenses [2004-02-26 05:37:07 +0000 UTC]

here in my house. it's like 50 degrees

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Remote-Spook In reply to LordOfSenses [2004-02-26 05:35:51 +0000 UTC]

cold where?

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kaoru-himura [2004-02-26 04:31:19 +0000 UTC]

once again very nice very touching.

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Remote-Spook In reply to kaoru-himura [2004-02-26 05:20:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!!!

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bladerain [2004-02-25 22:53:52 +0000 UTC]

Too depressed to say more than this: it really makes me feel something... Good work. Keep it up (not for these reasons though).

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Remote-Spook In reply to bladerain [2004-02-26 04:21:15 +0000 UTC]

I can any reason I want but that won't be the only one... how's that? hehe

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azrael0033 [2004-02-25 09:11:14 +0000 UTC]

a story as old as time itself... we've all discovered, or soon will; how much love can damage us.

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Remote-Spook In reply to azrael0033 [2004-02-25 09:14:00 +0000 UTC]

we all gotta learn someday

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