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Remote-Spook — Repeat It
Published: 2004-05-11 21:17:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 205; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 17
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Repeat it, repeat itAnd it will be ok.
But their voices are harsh,
I can’t hear myself think.
Then louder
Repeat it, repeat it
And it will be ok.
Now they’re stabbing me
With their eyes.
They must think I’m crazy.
Then louder and with diction
Repeat it, repeat it
And it will be ok.
They’re still looking.
But now,
They’re whispering to themselves.
It hurts.
Then louder, with diction
Forcefully now
Repeat it, repeat it
And it will be ok.
They’re coming towards me.
I’m scared.
Why won’t they go away?
Then louder, with diction
Forcefully now, have faith
Repeat it, repeat it
And it will be ok.
They’re close.
I feel their breath.
It’s burning my skin.
Then louder, with diction
Forcefully now, have faith
Have hope
Repeat it, repeat it
And it will be ok.
They’re here,
They’re at me.
They’re going to take me now.
Then louder, with diction
Forcefully now, have faith
Have hope, you must believe it more
Repeat it, repeat it
And it will be ok.
They’re gone, I’m free,
But now I’m scared and alone.
Repeat it, repeat it
And it will be ok.
Then repeat it once more.
Just in case.
Comments: 16
oh that is incredibly cool, i like that back and forth type style...and a little freaky in quite a good way. nice job :cheer:
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This is really great! Creepy and dark mood (but then again, that's my kind of thing). It sound something out of a ghost story or something. Really really good.
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That's awesome!!! I really like this, it's really creepy... it really portrays the sort of internal conflict one experiences in fear... I like it! very good, I'm jealous
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wooooooooooooo yay!!! boo ya! haha ok just thanks then hehe
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O_O ...I never say anything to them. I'm the wannabe-strong, silent type. Then again, prayers are what I do...I figure God could probably take 'em on better than me. I'm a scaredy-cat with a dog too old to fight back. I like this though...just how you lined it up on separate sides...it's spiffy.
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hahahaha yeah he would do a much better job unless he feels you should do it on your own then... make him proud!
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yea, it took the colum wiht featured deviations and stuff, and put it over the text on the right side
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i'd prefer puppies but that's a long story
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ferret could work... if it doesn't pee on me
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not you, but maybe your shoe
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good, my computer coverd the right side of the poem, even after i reloaded it, but i got the point.
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it covered it?????????
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