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Published: 2004-10-02 05:25:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Stop, freeze timeEnjoy this moment now
So sweet, sublime
So loverly, but how
His lips, his kiss
Soon to touch mine
So quick, I can't miss
I'm on cloud nine
This memory so great
Etched in my heart
First kiss now eight
Cannot be apart
Seconds count down
Which started with ten
My love, I've found
In seventh heaven
No, too fast
A kiss, a gift
Another second past
Only six left
Please, more slow
I beg you, Father Time
This second don't go
Now just five
Thest four for him
Also for me
I care for him
But now there's only three
My love's to him two
He's the only one
Zero...
TIME'S UP!
Comments: 12
What is it that you can really know about a person anyways? The past is useless in defining a person. Their present and future seem to be better criteria to base your estimates upon. Anyhoo. I liked the piecem but it should have broken into something completely wildly erotic
Instead of Zero, Times up, it should be
My passions I cant hold back,
(fill in rest of poem here)
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Whoa!!
No words for this one right now! Thumbs up.
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i really liked it...but it made me really sad. but it's okay...the wrighting was good...(?)!!
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interesting that the things i know about you.....do not match the things you write about....
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and and and i thought it was funny
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i thought i like tacos.
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i wrote this thinking about absolutely nothing
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