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Published: 2004-02-12 06:31:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 21
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Description And time passes...
Still, they may never know.
But that knowledge is it,
And it never matters.
It is never part of everything.
Only everything matters, not it.

And time passes...
My secrets are kept.
I should tell all, but there is no...
None, there is no, no need.
The painful truth need only be,
Be mine to bear.

And time passes...
The pain so simple becomes it.
And it... like knowledge... it
No matter.
But the hidden truth,
The hidden mind, cannot hide.

And time passes...
Decision made for them,
For the hidden mind.
Release it, no release what matters.
Free everything, free everyone.
Show myself, show all.

And time passes...
And as time passes
Pain passes, knowledge is acquired
And it, it never matters.

And time passes...
They will know
That as time passed,
I stepped into the light
And the knew me better than before,
Better than now.
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Comments: 14

GreenFrog [2004-02-18 12:37:23 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful, it reflects you... Tim

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Remote-Spook In reply to GreenFrog [2004-02-18 19:38:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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GreenFrog In reply to Remote-Spook [2004-02-19 15:13:44 +0000 UTC]

Tim

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soulwrai [2004-02-17 09:23:29 +0000 UTC]

more great writing... I am liking your style and flair

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Remote-Spook In reply to soulwrai [2004-02-17 19:28:52 +0000 UTC]

heheh yay!

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LordOfSenses [2004-02-17 05:48:20 +0000 UTC]

An enjoyable read with widom behind it. I found it choppy, but the cut up was with point. It brought attention to specific points of value within the text. Bravo.

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Remote-Spook In reply to LordOfSenses [2004-02-17 05:57:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you again i kept telling my friends that i wasn't being honest about a situation but they dismissed it as a joke.

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KarmaGhost [2004-02-13 04:40:05 +0000 UTC]

What a beautiful conglomeration of the clash of Western values and Eastern indifference! Great use of contradiction in this piece. I truly admire the constant "and so time passes" ...and so time does pass, and stepping into the light, everything that seems wrong is all right now...wow...that's bold, beautiful art!

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Remote-Spook In reply to KarmaGhost [2004-02-13 07:38:54 +0000 UTC]

hehehe half white half asian... does it really show??? thank you!!!!

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fated-will In reply to Remote-Spook [2004-02-24 03:55:03 +0000 UTC]

really? so am i! I'm half japanese on my mom's side. you?

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Remote-Spook In reply to fated-will [2004-02-24 07:22:40 +0000 UTC]

exactly

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aislynslaine [2004-02-12 06:36:00 +0000 UTC]

oooh, double exposure times like five... and it looks good..

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Remote-Spook In reply to aislynslaine [2004-02-12 07:00:29 +0000 UTC]

why thank you!!!

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aislynslaine In reply to Remote-Spook [2004-02-12 07:17:04 +0000 UTC]

much welcomes to you

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