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Remote-Spook — Upon Reflection Up Till Now
Published: 2004-08-09 21:16:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 149; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description Blackened maze
     Single journey
Endless path
My home

Drowned mind
     Watered body
Wrinkled hands
Rusted life

Liquid chalk
     Flavored bean
Dried mouth
Awakened clone

Closed-in waves
     Crescendo voices
Pulled decisions
Forced real world

Push the pins
     Slice the tongue
Crush the thoughts
Stronger will

Repel the rest
     Draw one near
Focused feeling
Magnetized heart

Yellow raincoat
     Filled with clover
Scented breeze
Someone else’s heart

Bronzed memories
     Polished pale-green
Silver potential
Clear sight
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Comments: 14

vmaverik [2005-01-08 08:43:26 +0000 UTC]

Very classy, elegant, and full of meaning. The style is very developed and has an aura of something I cannot quite place. Another masterpiece created by a truly artistic mind.

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CaptainPetar [2004-08-26 18:57:24 +0000 UTC]

i likey lotsey. i miss you TONS!!

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bladerain [2004-08-21 21:10:30 +0000 UTC]

Way cool!
Really liked the way it sounds when I read it out loud!

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Remote-Spook In reply to bladerain [2004-08-22 03:15:38 +0000 UTC]

it's meant to

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azrael0033 [2004-08-15 03:59:22 +0000 UTC]

me likes it.
very much, I say.
do another soon
it'll make my day.

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Remote-Spook In reply to azrael0033 [2004-08-15 04:52:02 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwww ty!

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sanjose [2004-08-10 15:16:46 +0000 UTC]

you don't post very often (if you do, I suppose my computer is stupid, sorry), but when you do, it's alwas worth the wait. good job.

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Remote-Spook In reply to sanjose [2004-08-10 19:39:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks sweetie

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heinouslakroga [2004-08-10 03:26:16 +0000 UTC]

yes, very nicely done, however, it begs the question, what flavor of flavored bean? I was thinking vanilla, your thoughts?

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Remote-Spook In reply to heinouslakroga [2004-08-10 05:43:14 +0000 UTC]

it was coffee silly. you know coffee tastes like chalk to me!

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heinouslakroga In reply to Remote-Spook [2004-08-11 02:49:46 +0000 UTC]

ah, how silly of me, my mistake.

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Remote-Spook In reply to heinouslakroga [2004-08-11 05:48:33 +0000 UTC]

nod

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kaoru-himura [2004-08-10 00:30:01 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely written

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Remote-Spook In reply to kaoru-himura [2004-08-10 05:43:45 +0000 UTC]

ty!!!! i love your comments always a pick me up

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