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Description You all picked a redhead heroine from various superheroine choices offered up in recent polling.  Here's some concept art for that heroine, Cardinal.

Let me know what you think, good or bad.

Meanwhile, I need to design our Asian maid and our sexy adventurer concepts.


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RenderPretender In reply to ??? [2019-10-20 14:26:39 +0000 UTC]

Actually, it all started with a character named Red Velvet. I took her out of my gallery, I think.

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MirrorKhaos [2016-11-19 12:06:36 +0000 UTC]

Very Good.

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RenderPretender In reply to MirrorKhaos [2016-11-25 13:35:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Legion1a [2016-11-18 16:58:44 +0000 UTC]

cool - but those boots are realy really yellow!  Prefer black

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RenderPretender In reply to Legion1a [2016-11-25 13:36:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Legion, I think the majority agrees with you.

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devduck01 [2016-11-17 22:01:26 +0000 UTC]

She is rocking the costume, love the eyes

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RenderPretender In reply to devduck01 [2016-11-25 13:36:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks DD!

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devduck01 In reply to RenderPretender [2016-11-25 15:29:30 +0000 UTC]

Nay Problem laddie

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hmbugs [2016-11-17 21:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...a few thoughts. The basic costume I like..with the exception of the color of the boots. But this has already been commented on quite a bit by others and if I'm not mistaken you've already mentioned you are thinking of changing the color. So...but I thought I just add my voice to the chorus. I'm pretty much impartial to the wings but in this case I'm wondering if bat wings would have worked better. Let me explain. I know you meant her to be a heroine but her name puzzles me. Cardinal Sins doesn't strike me as inherently good name for a SJW. When I saw the name my first thought was villainess. Honestly, I think this character has great potential for a villainess. Replace those bird wings with some menacing bat wings, give her some red boots and PRESTO!  Another hot villainess!    

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RenderPretender In reply to hmbugs [2016-11-25 13:38:32 +0000 UTC]

Boots = Yeah, you're right.  So is everyone else. 

Her name is Cardinal. Sins is the name of the comic.  So, she's just Cardinal, she gets to keep her SJW card. 

I might make her nemesis something like what you've mentioned though, an evil bat girl might be a fun change of pace.

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hmbugs In reply to RenderPretender [2016-11-25 17:11:20 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe...geez, I really fudged it with her name.    

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RenderPretender In reply to hmbugs [2016-11-25 19:10:29 +0000 UTC]

Nah, you're just passionate!  It's okay. 

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TazLooking [2016-11-17 18:55:51 +0000 UTC]

She looks very nice! Is that her cold weather outfit??  

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RenderPretender In reply to TazLooking [2016-11-25 13:39:43 +0000 UTC]

  Haha.

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KarenGaianni [2016-11-17 02:04:14 +0000 UTC]

I feel ashamed >.<
I didn't saw the image until now   And is great!    The details of that red haired gal are amazing, the outfit and the 'cape' (Why a cape? She didn't saw 'The Incredibles!'?)    And also is true, if she wants to sneak or make an stealth mission, that shiny boots didn't help at all.

 :  I think that someone is hiding in here?

:  Eh??!

:  Well something is glowing at the corner, something really shiny!

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RenderPretender In reply to KarenGaianni [2016-11-25 13:41:01 +0000 UTC]

She doesn't have a cape, lol.

Yes, the boots are going to change to either red or black.  I'll get back to work on her soon.  Promise.

Thanks for commenting.

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RockTheComics [2016-11-16 19:10:24 +0000 UTC]

This bird eats normal birds seed? (

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RenderPretender In reply to RockTheComics [2016-11-16 20:06:33 +0000 UTC]

Yes!

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Mattkind [2016-11-16 17:23:55 +0000 UTC]

I like her

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RenderPretender In reply to Mattkind [2016-11-16 17:39:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Matt

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kb7rky [2016-11-16 14:27:35 +0000 UTC]

Where's my GIF Of Approval?

...ah, there it is...

goo.gl/eO92Ez

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RenderPretender In reply to kb7rky [2016-11-16 14:30:02 +0000 UTC]

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akizz [2016-11-16 12:23:06 +0000 UTC]

She's like the opposite of White Owl. Interesting.

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RenderPretender In reply to akizz [2016-11-16 13:09:31 +0000 UTC]

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RenderPretender In reply to akizz [2016-11-16 13:06:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. 

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typewriter17 [2016-11-16 11:36:16 +0000 UTC]

Two thumbs up.  I'd make her boots red, too.  White boots have to be heck to keep clean.  Love her pose.

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RenderPretender In reply to typewriter17 [2016-11-16 13:06:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.  Yeah, it seems the boots are the main issue.

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Cracoviia [2016-11-16 11:19:01 +0000 UTC]

She looks fantastic I don't think we have that bird in Europe but I know it because it is on one of my table-mats They have a lovely colour scheme and you have used it very nicely here. I like the slightly pink shade of red in her hair and the wings looks really good. Did you create the little bird logo yourself?

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RenderPretender In reply to Cracoviia [2016-11-16 15:35:41 +0000 UTC]

No, the logo was "borrowed" and changed slightly from something I found on one of those clipart websites.

Thanks, I'm glad you like her!

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Rob66 [2016-11-16 11:03:59 +0000 UTC]

VERY good.  We need more redheads in peril!!!  This is a great start   

Though I think a yellow belt and red boots might be less conspicuous for a heroine active at night time.

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RenderPretender In reply to Rob66 [2016-11-16 14:30:25 +0000 UTC]

Fair enough!

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bob-warden [2016-11-16 10:58:32 +0000 UTC]

She's pretty wild for a heroine! I'm guessing the wings are part of her costume. I do like the outfit, and funny enough I think the boots are okay. Perhaps a little too bright, but okay. And that leather belt can be easily used against her!

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RenderPretender In reply to bob-warden [2016-11-16 15:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Bob.

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kenfusion45 [2016-11-16 09:49:38 +0000 UTC]

Overall, I like her look.  My nitpicks are:

the wings look kinda small.  Bigger wings look more impressive

her belt looks like it is below her hips (but I love the fact that they serve no practical purpose )

the bright yellow boots others have mentioned.  I'm not sure what exactly to do to fix it.  Maybe make her gloves the same color to unify the costume?  

Looking forward to seeing more of her, no pun intended.

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RenderPretender In reply to kenfusion45 [2016-11-16 15:14:30 +0000 UTC]

The wings are small on purpose mostly because I didn't want her to look like a hawk or eagle and because I haven't decided if they are for show or really work.  

As for the boots, LOL.  Total fail on my part.

Thanks for the feedback.

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kenfusion45 In reply to RenderPretender [2016-11-16 16:35:34 +0000 UTC]

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White0wlsuperheroine [2016-11-16 08:59:16 +0000 UTC]

Ooo I'm a guest in a rare first edition!  This will only make it increase in Value.  Cardinal looks interesting.

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RenderPretender In reply to White0wlsuperheroine [2016-11-16 13:15:17 +0000 UTC]

Interesting doesn't mean good!  

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White0wlsuperheroine In reply to RenderPretender [2016-11-16 13:45:13 +0000 UTC]

"May you live in interesting times"

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KristinF [2016-11-16 07:13:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh very nice, those yellow boots are very... yellow!

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RenderPretender In reply to KristinF [2016-11-16 13:14:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, gonna change them.  

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Apocalypse3DX [2016-11-16 06:44:58 +0000 UTC]

Overall, I like her. (Oh, the puns.... LOL)

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RenderPretender In reply to Apocalypse3DX [2016-11-16 13:15:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Apoc.

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Delaniac [2016-11-16 06:09:19 +0000 UTC]

I approve!  One of my pet peeves is superheroes that can just randomly fly for no reason, so I have a soft spot for winged heroines.  I mean, yeah, it still doesn't make sense, there's no way their wings could support them and at best they could glide, but still, I'm on board.

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RenderPretender In reply to Delaniac [2016-11-16 13:17:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks DD, maybe she'll get a Siren team up at some point. 

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Delaniac In reply to RenderPretender [2016-11-16 21:31:41 +0000 UTC]

 

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OakEgg [2016-11-16 05:11:43 +0000 UTC]

I like her, but would have preferred her boots to be red too

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RenderPretender In reply to OakEgg [2016-11-16 13:11:44 +0000 UTC]

Haha, more boot complaints.   I love it 

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OakEgg In reply to RenderPretender [2016-11-17 08:56:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Well at least I ain't the only one

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Dangerguy01 [2016-11-16 04:33:52 +0000 UTC]

I like the name and the costume. Cool concept. Look forward to seeing more of her. A lot more of her, if you catch my drift...

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