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RevRuby — cannot be for me
Published: 2005-09-24 23:54:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 257; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 9
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Description i am who i am, no more, no less.

i can feel the horse inside me,
restless at the gate.
chomping at the self imposed bit
heart pounding in anticipation.

i can feel the purr of the cat that resides in my breast
the need for night
and creature comforts
one person, maybe two
my only companions

i can feel the whimper of the dog that breathes within me
looking for acceptance
crying for loneliness
jumping for joy
when friends return

i can feel the caged bird in my hands
aching for a freedom
my pencil cannot give

this is me, and more.  
i am me, and more.
but i am not enough for you
and never could be for him.
but i still cannot be for me.
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Comments: 17

randthuntley [2006-03-22 14:27:58 +0000 UTC]

awesome job .....keep up the great work



I'm featuring this in my journal

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RevRuby In reply to randthuntley [2006-03-23 02:12:09 +0000 UTC]

awe...thank you so much

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randthuntley In reply to RevRuby [2006-03-23 02:47:49 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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jamguy7 [2005-09-25 23:36:43 +0000 UTC]

wow thats awesome

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RevRuby In reply to jamguy7 [2005-09-26 12:25:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Attalus [2005-09-25 17:46:33 +0000 UTC]

Very sad. Now I know why you like to do horses. Hope it gets better.

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RevRuby In reply to Attalus [2005-09-25 17:56:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Togemon [2005-09-25 13:09:22 +0000 UTC]

I hope you're feeling better... very nice poem btw.

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RevRuby In reply to Togemon [2005-09-25 17:55:53 +0000 UTC]

yes and no on the feeling better part. thank you

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huffaluff [2005-09-25 07:46:49 +0000 UTC]

thats exactly me- but I never let it show

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RevRuby In reply to huffaluff [2005-09-25 11:43:06 +0000 UTC]

i'm sorry that you sit here with me in this respect.

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GalaciaBarton [2005-09-25 02:28:42 +0000 UTC]

*nuzzles*

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RevRuby In reply to GalaciaBarton [2005-09-25 03:05:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Deathkiller [2005-09-25 00:03:35 +0000 UTC]

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RevRuby In reply to Deathkiller [2005-09-25 01:27:24 +0000 UTC]

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AbbyLove [2005-09-24 23:55:50 +0000 UTC]

i ike it alot very nice!!!

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RevRuby In reply to AbbyLove [2005-09-25 01:26:09 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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